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just everything... i can't determine what's my problem within my first work.

I'm in the middle of heavy editing chapters for now. How do I adapt into editing a story?

I'm curious how recent readers of mine had two or three active readers, or how the Recent Readers works... when in actuality, there might be more than how the recent readers depicted... is it because most readers activated themselves anonymously?

My first work (Optabilis Mundo) would be definitely a hentai series with long series that I truly wanted to wish for.... It'll be better if I could write it in manga for visual enjoyment. My second work (Trap and Fade: The Worst Fantasy) would be either anime or visual novel without a sole...

Yeah, is there something wrong about my boi and waifus there?

One review from my first work said that I have a bad writing style which made most readers dropped out, and now, I feel pressured for major editing. I don't know how to solve myself for this.

Can expressionless hide his internal expression? Like he didn't want to show his expression just not to show how he truly feels outside. Also... he has the goal of becoming manga artist which is his only way to live his life away from his own apathetic personality... more like, trying to show...

I don't think I would agree the KISS rule. Even if it must be applied, most authors would titled it specifically for a proper description. Either be a short phrase or one word... it might cause a chaotic relevance in a certain chapter.

This is the example how it looks like when separating chapters from arc to arc without naming an arc in every chapter title. I want this feature to execute within the Table of Contents. It would be easier to let the readers identify the arc and shorten the chapter title.

No... not that, he was framed by the authorities, Being Dark Lord for him is not his real job nor intentions. He is just a normal human being with dark ability shit that he was given mysteriously... so yeah, his bullshit task or goal is to extract his dark ability something

I appreciate that orphanage reference, but giving no shit isn't my option for him. He's more like, avoiding shit. Think about it, let's say that he is accused of Dark Lord trying to destroy the world, but he prefers to live a normal life, but the authority never stops demanding him to be...

I'm curious how do I write about him. I'm planning to write a new story. My first fiction talks about Lust, and my new story talks about Sloth, but two of them will not share the universe, in other words, they're canonically different and separated. Theme about story and character: > Sloth >...

This kinda reminds me of Urotsukidoji or any retro hentai when gore hentai was a thing before, and I would say that I might relished on that one, but there's a possibility that most readers or me would drop it out when the concept within your story becomes unreasonable, and it will turn it into...

Just like when I finished playing horror games, then I would head over to the cat videos for my mood swing. I can relate to that..

Judging from watching the retro and current shows, the majority even the past shonen engages to violence, sex, or anything else that is deeply mature. I kinda love those times when gore was a thing before, but now, they used it as a horror concept (specifically body horror). The plot and from...

Popular works sometimes don't get really well to the story — which the readers/viewers alike are looking for one or several subjective matter to the fiction... a value which make them attracted the most, but some of them have good contrasting quality. Let's take the Demon Slayer for example; of...

Instead of switching POV, why not choose the third POV omniscient? It’s more reliable if you execute it well other than just to head hop each and every character.