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  1. LuoirM

    Writing Convince me emojis is a bad idea

    Lately I've been using :< emoji (or whaeves they called) in both my manga translation and novel Ergo: How is that a bad thing?! It express, it tells more story and overall it's cute. Yet no author or editor alive would like to sit at the same table as you when you implement it...
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    I wrote bullshit, but does it make sense?

    Sometimes, an author just asspull bullsh*ts and somehow the readers will find a way to interpret it as the author being a godlike genius author. *cough cough* Oda *cough I tried doing the same! In this chapter of a story, the FMC (Ashrosaliera), a bratty kid that got her ego high and was...
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    What would you write?

    A guy named Jeff (kudos if you get the reference) was really happy you helped him write up the divorce paper with his 3rd wife and offered you a magical piece of paper. The magical thing is, whatever you write will this paper will be broadcast to all author around the world, they'll understand...
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    [AI Generated] Random 4:30 AM experiment with ChatGPT

    I asked ChatGPT to analyze one of my old poem about a woman in my dreams, then I told it to generate me some prompts based on what it think about the poem so I could run those prompts in a different model engine, this is my document. Part 0. Model and website I was shown by a senpai, and I...
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    Give me a new font to play with

    For the last month, I've been writing with this cute font, but it's getting kinda boring, and I'm a playa who throw out girls when I'm done so I wanna try something new, can someone suggest me a good font? Most liked comment gets it if there's multiple suggestion
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    Writing Naming is not hard, but you are soft.

    HAVE YOU EVER HAPPEN TO THIS? "Oh, I struggle with naming characters!" "Oh, I took 6 hours to come up with the name of this country, and it has 3 different layers of meaning. The first layer is..." "Oh, I don't know what to call my magic system or make it sound cool." Well, here in the...
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    Beware the pipeline

  8. LuoirM

    So about my first attempt at Yuri Smut...

    [R18 topic and language] So, I have this story, and I wanted some fan service after such a long journey. And what better fan service then two girls freaking, yeah? I have this one sadistic woman, she's a harpy and a warden, her wings are sharp, she liked to use it to cut prisoners when she...
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    Weird dream that goes from 1 to 100 real fast.

    I dreamt that a femboy from this forum came to visit me and took me on a vacation in Vietnam via tour bus. At some point in the morning when we're still half asleep, he kissed me on the cheek and carresses me head. Then he posts on the forum how "it's okay to take risk and travel to a strange...
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    I think I'm an older women magnet.

    (Translated to English so details can be rough) Alright guys, I swear older women are drawn to me. I could count on one hand how many times this has happened, but five times already is still ridiculous The first time was a reckless relationship—basically, I got gr**med, but I don’t hold it...
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    Stay away from girls who play FPS games, guys, it's a world of pain.

    Back when I was 19, I met this older girl (3-4 years older than me), a recent banking graduate, on the Vietnamese CSGO Discord community. No one in the group knew she was a girl because she kept a super low profile. Her avatar was some sunset sky picture or something, her name was "abcdzzz9,"...
  12. LuoirM

    Hypothetical question.

    If someone were to start a fire to my company I'm working at with the intend to burn it down. What are the chances it'll be a success? Know that the situation at hand is that they don't know the layouts of the company nor what it looks like, this is their first time there. I think the small...
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    Settle a poem debate

    Me and me friends made some poem about our character's power, and we're dissing each other cus he said mine suck and I also think his ain't nothin' either. Please vote on which one is better, without the knowledge of who's who ofc. A. (A vampire character) As skyfalls and sundown, we shall...
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    It finally happened to me, a milestone indeed.

    It was a normal Friday evening where I was suppose to be depressed and shadow boxing with my great-great aunt ghost who's haunting the family bloodline because she was not allowed to wear her favorite pink shoes as a kid. But I checked Scribblehub and I got an inbox. It's a whistleblower...
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    Short rant about allegations and doubts

    Warning: R-word and SA allegations, underaged mentioned Sorry for opening up in such a weird way at 4AM in the morning For the last 4 years of my life my mind's been boggling with a very complex situation about me and a woman 4 years older than me, this was when I was around 14-15 years old...
  16. LuoirM

    My 4AM piece

    01:30 -> 4:00 | July 8th, 2024 The woman I worshipped came, She would stand in the wind, wearing a scarf She would stand in the snow, dressed in black. She would stand on the hill, looking at me. She would exist, yet we would never breathe at the same frequency. I have killed and died for her...
  17. LuoirM

    Writing I want to write a dystopian society.

    I want to write a dystopian story, revolving around an ideology of how to run a society that thrives way faster than normal but removes morals out of the equation, yadi yada same old bull you know what I mean. Basically the year 1950 they already have Tesla Cybertruck and blonde women on Tiktok...
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    English onomatopoeia suck massive hotdogs.

    I am reading a NSFW manga for career purposes when I got taken aback and flaccid because of how the character onomatopoeia-ed. Loud crying is "waaaaa" and soft crying is sob *Turns book* Did I miss a page? No. Oh my fucking days that's it lads, that's all they god, otherwise they'd hiccup...
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    Interestingly random conversation between me and friend

    Green text is me, red text is him, that is if you use light mode. (Context: We're both Vietnamese) What are your thoughts on some topics in this, such as the colonized revolution? Would it play out any good like history was or we'd all have to wait for some summoned hero? How about bloodline...
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