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  1. TinaMigarlo

    We need ids for sections!

    there's a naughty limit here, too. its just a higher naughty bar than on arr-arr. or lower bar, whichever.
  2. TinaMigarlo

    Seeking Hardboiled Critique: Does the atmosphere hit hard enough?

    I'll bite. OP. Think quick. what is the definition of the word "hardboiled". (this ought to be good)
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    Writing Prompt AI get truck-kun

    to work? the human wakes up and discovers a voice in their head. they can't decide if they are hearing it thru their ears, or just in their head. they question their sanity, naturally. but over time, they come to view the voice in different ways. they discover its a weird blend of in general...
  4. TinaMigarlo

    I got a new story

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    Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor

    Do I get rickrolled, if I click on the "BF turned into futa-lion-bybrid monster" story? asking for a friend. man, I always thought my humor was something. but you, you magnificent beast... your added aggrandizing performative dramatic flair, well, I just tip my hat.
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    Seeking Hardboiled Critique: Does the atmosphere hit hard enough?

    well. I just gotta read a thousand words of this. *ahem* hard-boil and noir, well, that's *just* my game... am, I allowed to use that word? I'll be back with a quick impression. i'll just edit-add my impressions as I go. [Synopsis] --------------- "The massive pillar throbbing beneath his...
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    Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor

    Wow. my neighbors kid just opened up a a box of cereal. guess what was in it, no seriously, guess! *&^%-ing "professional editor services" credentials. The grifters can't get anywhere with the art scam. the new grift is the editor scam. (sung to the tune of Whitesnake: Still of the Night)...
  8. TinaMigarlo

    I uploaded my story around 40 hrs ago - its not released yet.

    like I said. my favorite rogue AI bot, lol. (and I still think the "terminator at the door" joke was funny.)
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    How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story?

    ---nuance. broad strokes are one thing. what about the tiny things. ---dichotomy. a tough grizzled veteran of violence is one thing. are they something different when its not game time. ---little motif's or themes you pick up on. I have a recurring character that has a habit, an...
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    Writing Prompt AI get truck-kun

    interesting. does AI go into a vehicle and move around on their own suddenly? (a sentient spaceship. could be a cool team member or unique MC) does AI go into a human or alien body and control it? does AI reside co-exist with another person, and they have a passenger talking/helping them? it...
  11. TinaMigarlo

    I uploaded my story around 40 hrs ago - its not released yet.

    you learn something new every day. do colons do anything? Main series title: arc subtitle
  12. TinaMigarlo

    Real-Life Horrors

    exsanquinated... nice word drop. well played. I used that one in a novel, lol.
  13. TinaMigarlo

    [Genre: Hardboiled/Romance] Intense Thrill in "ArchitectH Series" [Adult/R-18]

    I wonder what you do with the eggs.
  14. TinaMigarlo

    Real-Life Horrors

    had sleep paralysis *once*, one time only thing. I was young, and never slept on my back... since. wow, was that a weird experience. didn't find out what it was, until years later. I was awake for surgery once. I was having my face rebuilt, after getting hurt bad. They gave me a shot in my...
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    Difference in image sizes between browser and mobile sites?

    Similar question from me... i'll sit there, trying to add a picture to a post. several times it will say "too big" sometimes, one of them "goes through" and it posts. ??? i feel like a little kid, beating the square peg into the round hole, but... it (eventually) works. this is on a laptop...
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    Just noticed there's no "Western" or "Wild West" tag

    (all good, but #2 is a serious classic) "my mistake. four coffins..."
  17. TinaMigarlo

    Add More Robust Chapter Scheduling Systems

    when you're loading up release chapters, yeah, it gets a bit tedious. You have to keep getting the exact "next day, next day" date down. The same time down. And if you're loading up say ten chappies? A honest mistake on chapter 2, now ripples through and you have to adjust 8 more dates. the...
  18. TinaMigarlo

    Fandom feature gone?

    flag! throwing a kosher flag on that. mental image called into question. Ref's decision called for. I feel as if that comment? Warped, my fragile little mind. I asked for "feedback", and titled a new "series", as "two sample chapters". you know, seeing how two chapters I liked from a (then...
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    My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"?

    i seem to have gotten a lot of early reviews of my excerpts (not here, different place) that made this formula you listed hit home with me, creating an eerie feeling. i would hear, typical: "Yeah, yeah, I get it. The character got killed. Dude, understand this. That's a sentence. Maybe a...
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    My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"?

    Between HP and the twilight type stuff... i just never wanted to read that stuff and never got the huge appeal. i have a (I think) funny story about being given an excerpt from 50-shades to read. i figured at *least* the movies would be decent to look into since I was writing SMUT. I finally...
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