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  1. MakBow

    Writing trash for fun

    Does anyone here every write trash for fun? Like you post your dedicated novel while on the side, you write one you really are just there to enjoy and you, maybe, will post it. That's what I like to do. I can dump the trash over there, so I can put the groceries over here.
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    Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy

    I don't think you are lazy. I just said lazy as click bait. And yes, I am fully aware that of both good and bad ones (100 Girlfriends I love, good harem manga) And I'm not saying it has to be written well, because you know, writing relationships is hard. I'm jus saying add at least one thing...
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    Improvement in my Entrance Creation

    Now that's funny since my speech teacher said the commas are full breaths whereas periods are just stops
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    Improvement in my Entrance Creation

    I'm in love with the comma okay!
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    Improvement in my Entrance Creation

    Not going to lie, I think I'm getting better at making entrances, but I don't know, I'm too hard on myself to truly give myself a pat on the back Context Marching through the abyssal castle, where heavy malevolence was the only thing one could feel alone, the Star King, clad in white armor that...
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    Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy

    ...........what's it called? Asking for a friend.
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    Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy

    I agree, I shall live as a moron. Never said it had to be caused by the harem. You can literally have some family member come in a freak everything up (100 Girlfriends & How not to Summon the Demon King) and I mean, Jobless Reincarnation also has harem with conflict sooooo.....
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    Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy

    Oh trust me, I will, one day, after I finish my current novel
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    Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy

    I'll say it: Harems are the easiest thing to write, the authors who write them are just lazy. I mean COME ON! Free characters! With no effort to get them in the harem! And you're telling me you can't just add ONE conflict they have? I'm telling you; harems are literally a free pass of...
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    Thoughts on the false religion I created (In my story)

    Well, there is a theme. It's more so not about the leaders, but more so the religion itself and how, in truth, humanity will never understand their universe as the true gods are amoral to their situation and how in the end, humanity has used religion for cope and control. So, there is...
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    Thoughts on the false religion I created (In my story)

    Well, I'm not really trying to say religious leaders are bad. At least I hope people don't get that idea. I just feel a cult is perfect for the setting I've set up
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    Thoughts on the false religion I created (In my story)

    Well, are they really gullible if supernatural things do happen, just be done by the leader who causes these events using his supernatural powers to help them and frame it as the God doing it, all for the sake of his own power. (He's not a good person, of course) Most generic ones just have...
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    Thoughts on the false religion I created (In my story)

    So, in the mystery novel, I created this religion/cult for my mystery novel, and I want you to tell me what you think of it: The religions centers around Himvrael, a god that is nothing more than a fake god created for the mastermind to use it as a beacon for supernatural power and those who...
  14. MakBow

    Damn bot notifications

    You ever just feel disappointed when you see that you have a message, thinking it may be a comment of someone who likes what you wrote, but when you open it, it's just a bot. Shiz's depressing
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Well, regardless of if it's hard for me, experience is key, so I'm prepared to mess up and this will be good practice for me since I've been getting better at slowing down recently when writing, able to make slow scenes not only about action and more about characters
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Well, at the start, it's him being more reckless as he holds no leads. it is only after a few things that I intend to have him solve other mysteries, especially since his past is directly connected to the church itself, which is connected to a majority of the mysterious in the city, so to...
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    yeah, I certainly had that planned. I already outlined a lot of characters and their motivations. How the church is run by someone with supernatural powers, the black plague that infects the city being a result of outer beings and a giant cosmic mess, resulting in monsters roaming the streets...
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Only the first one and even then, that was when I was a kid, so I vaguely remember somethings. I did read PigPen which is a good amnesia manhwa Oh, and if you want to know my main inspirations: Bloodborne, Dark Souls, Elden Ring, LOTM, Hotel of Mythos (An abandoned idea I had revamped to the...
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    It will be a sort of mystery of the city itself. For some context on the story: It is about my MC named Sunny, who awakens with no memories of his past life and very little understanding of the world and city he lives in called Blight Town, a steampunk city-state that is encased by walls of...
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Not much. I'm currently reading LOTM (Well, more so listening), I have watched Sherlock Homles, Get Out, Jigsaw if that counts, Nope, LongLegs, They Cloned Tyrone.
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