Wow you're a Flip?
I'm not a writer, but I want to suggest you editing with Red Horse as your editing buddy. It works for me when drawing, a pack of Sampoerna Splash and Bintang always work like a charm.
Day 18 : Try hatching Fully on cyberpunk-like character manually.
Edited : I redraw it from the start since the body composition a bit off. Also tried to draw and hatch it with my Old RGB 0.5mm Pen and 0.7mm Pen.