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Request feedback on last chapter
Questioned seems wrong. Questioned is more of a aggressive use. Better like that. 2) they, is TECHNICALLY correct. But for reader, it feels wrong, as the sentence at start is about "he" and the sudden "they" is too abrupt. (and forcing reader brains to search "which they???" for 2-3s) also...- Tsuru
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Request feedback on last chapter
Give link. (most people forget) ----- First sentence. Perfect. End sentence perfect. But what with this specific word in the middle ????? (throng) Good, but i think you over complexed the whole. I mean i'm NOT a tldr/zoomer. But sometimes too much is too much. And phrasing needed some...- Tsuru
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[IMG] (true reaction) (didnt expect your fast reply + and this worded reply xD)
(true reaction) (didnt expect your fast reply + and this worded reply xD)- Tsuru
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And reddit doesnt seems to mention wokeness / girl boss of it. Which is also a very good sign...
And reddit doesnt seems to mention wokeness / girl boss of it. Which is also a very good sign. Anyway, happy watching ^_^b- Tsuru
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From google : It seems its kinda good and kinda bad. Sometimes hommage, sometimes crappy...
From google : It seems its kinda good and kinda bad. Sometimes hommage, sometimes crappy copying. So i guess if you go with low expectations its good. And well, can't be worse than Borderlands on opposite side right XD- Tsuru
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Brain : TIME TO BRAINSTORM LOT OF CRAZY IDEAS !!!! (or remember the cringiest memories ever)
Brain : TIME TO BRAINSTORM LOT OF CRAZY IDEAS !!!! (or remember the cringiest memories ever)- Tsuru
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[IMG] sometimes gender-bender is a great thing.
sometimes gender-bender is a great thing.- Tsuru
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[IMG] SHF is pointless without my Botty. (Tsuru reverting to pre-Botty-era-Tsuru version)
SHF is pointless without my Botty. (Tsuru reverting to pre-Botty-era-Tsuru version)- Tsuru
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[IMG] (Meanwhile some other (but deserving it) characters with very cool-looking first entrance...
(Meanwhile some other (but deserving it) characters with very cool-looking first entrance, that caused huge popularity/fanbase)- Tsuru
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I mean. There is a particular anime, that was horribly BAD, but only popular thx to GIGA FAN...
I mean. There is a particular anime, that was horribly BAD, but only popular thx to GIGA FAN SERVICE AT FIRST EPISODE : (forgot there was this funny abridged video xD)- Tsuru
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Not to say they did bad voice acting, but : if they had more "normal" voice acting, and also...
Not to say they did bad voice acting, but : if they had more "normal" voice acting, and also possibly better scenes/plot/art, and not be "comic relief" some side characters would have won lot of fans for them and not "hated" Kuroko (To aru railgun) AQUA Shalltear Sakura (Naruto)- Tsuru
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[IMG] [SPOILER]
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"Good looks matter a lot." (example post UP)
"Good looks matter a lot." (example post UP)- Tsuru
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Humans were a big reason. But another big reason were the rats. That came on the boats with the...
Humans were a big reason. But another big reason were the rats. That came on the boats with the sailors. The rats, escaped boats, and gone on the island, ate the eggs of the dodos. (on the ground) If not for them, even if they ate their bellies until they exploded, pretty sure there would be 1...- Tsuru
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Oops my bad. Yep their island didnt have predators. I meant prev post in meaning : He is like...
Oops my bad. Yep their island didnt have predators. I meant prev post in meaning : He is like at bottom of food chain to the whole animal chain of the whole globe. ps : so yeah, it was lucky to be in a paradise island without other predators (or i guess they would turn extinct BEFORE HUMANS came)- Tsuru
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