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Cheer up! God may not make your story a good one, but he'll definitely gives you a better compensation.

Come on now, sis. Relax. Get it done bit by bit, let god decide, and sit down on the couch. Don't overthink it, relax. People who overthink often gets an illness, some even gets a mental breakdown and dip from earth down to the ground. And I would love not to see you among them.

Try recreating your MC's personality, and tell me if you're done with it. I gotta see what you made first before concluding. Bro, this humble dude wants the best for his country and has the confidence of a saint. Well, he is a saint, after all. "If you make good to everyone, people will...

Are you that uncertain? Come on now, my guy. Where's your ancestor's confidence?? I thought we were supposed to be brave and not get nervous.

Marc has provided you with some helpful stuff. Generally, use the POV you think best to tell a flashback. 3rd person is easier to do, and 1st person has personality but a little hard to create. But no worries, you'll find some fun bout writing in first person.

Basically... You typed like these here in the thread. But in your story, you wrote like an average english learner. So, why is that?

I'm gonna keep asking for you to elaborate with me and gives out the weird writing pattern topic's excuses. Magicians don't reveal their tricks... Also,

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