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    ADHD feedback for your chapters

    Early to one of these for once, cool. Thanks in advance! Also, how do you format messages to always have your book at the bottom?
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    How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description?

    if subverting this trope is going to be your biggest pull, maybe make the very first sentence about it, no fluff in front of it (the "waking to a medieval world' part.) Like, "What if someone didn't want to be isekaied? [rest of your synopsis]" or something with stronger wording. Kinda cliche...
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    We don't need AI Slop illustration [RANT]

    Not even. I made my cover image myself, for zero dollars, using google fucking slides. Maybe it looks bad, but it uses 1 stock image and otherwise simple slide assets. However, it's 100% mine. (and better than the blank default which we're all trying to avoid.) Obviously not everyone can/will...
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    What makes you stick with a story after the first 3–5 chapters?

    Wait, this is really good. Integrating this organically into plot-heavy scenes might be hard, but for anything in-between it definitely makes the characters feel more nuanced. Trying to balance real-feeling interactions with 'i need this to be brought up in conversation for x effect' is...
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    I will judge your book by its cover (pic, title, blurb and few pages) –– AI ASSISTED WORKS ARE WELCOME –– CLOSED (3/3)

    Not comedy, but try mine. Had to make the cover myself and I think it turned out alright. My biggest weakness is description and one-line paragraphs for sure. Other than that, tear it apart, thanks!
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    Feedbag Thread For Indie Writers of Original Fictions [Closed Till I Catch Up]

    New writer here. My story is something i've been wanting to get down somewhere anywhere for a while now. Figured somewhere small like SH fit. Be as brutal as you need - I know some points are in clear need of improvement. Since its well under 10k and the first 2 chapters don't do the plot enough...
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