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Oh? Well, if you like it, then don't mind if I fix and rephrase your comment. "I going through a period-" Add "Am", or the short version of it, I'm. There's a verb that has the "-ing" on it, so better type "I am" or "I'm". Do this often, and you'll understand why it is needed. "But here I just...

"Don't wanna lose your time." I think I'm getting a little too irritating, sorry. Can't bear the small, grammatical mistakes with the OCD I have.

I ain't letting you get a taste on my butt cheeks, you cannibal,

Maybe proofreading?

Reminds me of a specific entity... Heck, you even made me remember a specific archangel and its underlings. And the murderer of the poor psychologically tortured victim...

Mind if I help fixing it then?

Sist, work on what you want to work. You know what? If you still have no preferences, what about writing the original story and keep it flowing till you published the fifth chapter. Then, you can decide which story is better to focus on. But, if you're asking me, well... I DEMAND YOU TO...

*"I've seen"* I recommend to use this when mentioning things happened on the past.

Now that's just cruel beyond human complexity.

I'm seeing some patterns here... Why'd you have most of your chap titles starting with "A"? Also, damn. Seeing your published schedule makes me feel less like a procrastinator.