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sensory details, how it smelt how it looked. onomatopoeia is your friend and be lighthanded with the gore- a little goes a long way

Would you rather have bad art or no art inserted in a story (especially a description-heavy sort like in romances)

So I recently mustered the courage to finally throw my story out onto this website and within a few hours I was given a five star on my story, which is nice but it's mostly unearned, as there is only 4 chapters. The review that isn't really a review brings a few questions to mind, such as: Who...

When there's a language that a character doesn't know, how do you the reader prefer to have it shown? Understandable to the reader Not understandable to the reader

I like it decently enough until the point where it's more burdensome to read than to go without