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  1. HelloHound

    Envy's Free Feedback Thread [Thread Closed]

    thanks for reading and your thoughts and I'll seriously consider the whole changing language thing considering several other reviewers also suggested that, but I added it so people would have a reason to care about the mom a bit more so I'm not sure how to fix that particular issue. Maybe I...
  2. HelloHound

    My brain has openly revolted and is refusing me access to braincells

    I'll let the brain win tonight and try again in the morning
  3. HelloHound

    Magic for All or magic for some

    I like the idea that minor magic (lifestyle type of stuff) is reasonably common but the magic that can be an active threat is rarer and based on efforts/resources
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    How long does it take you to write a chapter?

    it feels like a million and a half years but usually a couple hours if all goes well
  5. HelloHound

    Fox-eyed characters

    there's a trope where a character has their eyes seemingly closed but are able to otherwise see https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EyesAlwaysShut I personally like the trope but I've not encountered any stories where the MC has that kind of vibe but it's not unusual for a side...
  6. HelloHound

    miniature stuff is usually automatically considered cute but it's not as common for gigantic...

    miniature stuff is usually automatically considered cute but it's not as common for gigantic stuff to be called cute; I've never heard someone call the world's biggest rocking chair adorable but you shrink a sofa and you find all sorts popping outta the woodwork to call it smol
  7. HelloHound

    Question

    shower at night and put on new ones; y'all got feel-cicles and I don't trust like that
  8. HelloHound

    yeah it's like the dough fights against every movement you make- really irritating but I find it...

    yeah it's like the dough fights against every movement you make- really irritating but I find it satisfying to smack it with the rolling pin
  9. HelloHound

    Recommendations Give Me All Your Manhwas!

    pretty much anything by reaper scans; they got good taste in action
  10. HelloHound

    First Chapter Analysis

    I figured with my meager writing experience it would be easier to conceal some information from my protagonist and bias what information she does come across. And I might edit out the opposite symbols for stuff that Sybil isn't able to interpret language wise but I thought that the audience...
  11. HelloHound

    Reviewing: A Rough Sketch.

    that was an interesting essay about your framework and I have fond memories about the setup (I used a similar method with my past assignments) My story isn't hefty in any sense of the word but brevity is the source of wit eh? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/501740/for-want-of-a-house/...
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    one thing to learn about me is that I am hype to watch 40+ videos about video game analysis for...

    one thing to learn about me is that I am hype to watch 40+ videos about video game analysis for games i have never and will never play
  13. HelloHound

    made myself some surprisingly good ravioli and gorged myself; now horizontal and sleepy :blob_melt:

    made myself some surprisingly good ravioli and gorged myself; now horizontal and sleepy :blob_melt:
  14. HelloHound

    post-pasta clarity is now in session

    post-pasta clarity is now in session
  15. HelloHound

    I wish you well with both writing and your time on this website

    I wish you well with both writing and your time on this website
  16. HelloHound

    too bad their comments were also taken with me deleting my comment, I do feel a bit bad but also...

    too bad their comments were also taken with me deleting my comment, I do feel a bit bad but also Who Asked Them To Talk So Much under my one (1) statement
  17. HelloHound

    IT WORKED IM FREE

    IT WORKED IM FREE
  18. HelloHound

    well! I've Definitely Gotten Them! I can't figure out how to delete my original comment so I...

    well! I've Definitely Gotten Them! I can't figure out how to delete my original comment so I guess this is my day today
  19. HelloHound

    there's a whole flippin conversation underneath my comment made hours ago 20+ comments between...

    there's a whole flippin conversation underneath my comment made hours ago 20+ comments between 2-3 people that are possibly related to my original comment if you squint and tilt your head. Why don't they just start a private conversation in dm? to torture me?
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