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Yeah. I probably am using the semicolons wrong, but I'm just some teen so… Idk, maybe I’ll do some research on it. I’m not sure what you meant exactly but I’ll try! About the story, it’s more of an isekai ish thing that the supernatural stuff is leading up to.The first few chapters are basically...

Thank you for the feedback! I fixed the synopsis, cause I honestly forgot that I wrote that; thank you for pointing it out! I copied and pasted it from my original version on webnovel lol. Also, you have alot of valid points about the grammar, I'll try to focus more on that; but it gets a bit...

Thank you!(*≧∪≦)✨?

Thank you for the feedback! I agree about the grammar; writing on my phone leaves a lot of room for error, so I’ll definitely go give it another edit over. About the second correction tho, I’ll probably just delete the sequence about him flinching back and all that because it’s redundant...

I’m honestly not very confident in my writing yet, but maybe you can give my first chapter a look?https://www.scribblehub.com/series/674987/scripted-fate/

Um...What's gankutsuou?

Here's some character designs and random brain rot that I drew for my novel. MC final design ( after he goes through a shit load of trauma. This is what he's gonna look like after like the middle point of the planned storyline) Other MC/ main MC's love interest? Idk yet Them together ✨...

I'd appreciate some brutally honest feedback, cause I'm pretty new to this writing thing lol https://www.scribblehub.com/series/674987/scripted-fate/

Im pretty new to this website so I'll appreciate any kind of feedback! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/674987/scripted-fate/

Hi! I just posted my first chapter and was hoping for some constructive criticism! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/674987/scripted-fate/

Hi! I just posted my first chapter here on scribble hub and was wondering if you can look over it! I agree with all the points u made cause honestly, it's really reasonable. I'm honestly looking for some brutal honesty, cause my writing is all over the place lol. My book is called scripted fate...