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That works too, I have a lot of fluff in my story as well. You can focus on the strengthening of their bonds through the emotions and flesh slapping they share. Sex can be comforting, especially when it's with people you trust and consider friends.

You can have the two things play off of each other. For example, if the news was that a town was destroyed, you could use similar words in the orgy. Houses burning down can go into descriptors of burning desire. Slaughtered civilians could be related to seed spilled on the floor, potential lives...

So I started with your Outsider story since it had the most chapters. When I had time to read, that was one of the first things I looked for. I have two things that I didn't see mentioned yet. First, some of your boxes are hard to read on a phone. That's not a major issue, just a little...

I've stopped myself from giving my MC a few neat things because it would make them too hard to kill. So I think it's a good mindset if you aren't writing a heavy power fantasy. I also like sprinkling in weaknesses as I write, some of them get fixed, some don't.

My story has this, but it's also a dark tragedy, and not exactly a harem. I know from some of my readers comments that you'd definitely have an audience for the concept, so if the only thing holding you back is whether or not people will read it... Of course write it. :blob_paint:

My coffee maker is dying. I think it's hard water build-up.

I finally have a chapter buffer for releases, even if it's small. I feel less stressed, and will celebrate with a candle-lit bubble bath later.

You have died of dysentery.

Honey trapping? Well, it would give you more opportunities to write lewd scenes.

I've wanted to write since I was a young teen who listened to too much Avril Lavigne. I made different worlds and stories in my brain, planning them out. I got married a few years out of highschool, had kids, and did life stuff. So I never had time to actually put it all into a coherent form...

It's not wrong so long as you don't get confrontational about it. You were ready to let it go, so do that.

Might as well lick them yourself then right? There's no shame in making sure resources aren't wasted.

I'm also oddly drawn to the third option. Getting floofed by the fluff for once. I need to write this down. Also, get well soon.

Slept too long, drooled all over my pillow. Now I have to hand wash a pillow.

I like your idea of using them as a reason for a lack of wars in your current setting. You said greedy people could be trying to find a way to get rid of them so they can war monger and profiteer. That's where your instances of slavery can come in. If you end up wanting to go darker, have...

I agree with most of these tips. Of course every author is different, so I'll have to disagree with the audience part. I personally don't write my novel for my readers, I'm writing it for myself. I do plan on writing other works better suited to a reader base, but this first one is for me. If...

It's the chapter that causes a lot of readers to drop the novel because they were going too fast and didn't read the signs. Meaning the Tragedy genre and tags. I don't remember where I got it from.

If he's two, then I'd suggest colored paper. It's prettier to look at and at that age it will be difficult to use fine drawing tools. One thing that my kids liked when they were little, was when I'd rub black crayon on colored paper. They'd scratch it out with a screwdriver, which they found...

I've been getting those gummy ads on youtube too, but I haven't given in. Although I do use a writing program that spell checks my chapters for me. Words are hard sometimes.

That's obviously what the helmet was for.:blob_salute: