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Your first chapter scared me. I clicked and was immediately greeted by a a skin colored sack with veins on the corner right of my screen. Yes, I know you wrote pendant but that image of it just dangling at the side with a chain. Edit :

Is this a translated novel (Correct me If I'm wrong). Story reads well and begins with good explanations of premise. Only caveat : Just the sudden appearance of a semi-important character(Yuna) in the novel approaching MC and being talkative when her trait is (Slow to trust) when the first...

Yeah. It's a personal opinion, that's why salt is heavily added. 🧂 I ain't trying to be negative :blob_pat_sad:, sorry if offended. Am just curious if the ad numbers can go higher with the right ad style since you've got a more serious novel. ~But if the data says memes. Then memes it is!~

I'm going to be brutally honest here, take my comment with a grain of salt. As a reader. *All the attempted meme ads are really fucking cringy and makes me hate whatever story their posting even more. Edit : Only when looking from a purely reader perspective [No hate on yours tho since I am...

Cool ad campaign. Kinda wish it told me more of what you're writing, rn it just feels like all the other ads I've seen around.

Are you writing for escapism or for readers reactions or smoothness of story, you just mentioned different writing priorities. Because if you are writing for; Escapism - Then go ahead and make your dreams come true, even if it includes a sudden jarring scene of smut, because dreams are dreams...

Maybe you can delay the academy arc until the characters are older/stronger. Then write them as instructors instead, makes for a different feeling and tone of writing instead of the traditional "Hee-Hee, I'm a powerful noble. I'm going to bully you!" Edit : Characters can learn responsibility...

No difference. All are fold able in the eyes of my laundry abilities of Kung-Fold, Fold-Jitsu and Sock Wondo.

Folding clothes while people are still in em

Do the opposite. Zerg-rush the users with 50 chapters before they can even comprehend. Don't let the readers know your next move.

Needs more emotions. MC feels like a wet plank. It's got the conversation, It's got the descriptions. (y) Needs what the MC is feeling and thinking.

Hmmm...very good advice. Although being stuck in first-person means I can't really go in depth with my other characters internal monologues and emotions...(How do people do that with just facial expression?) I'd probably end the chapter with the character going for a smoke break due to the...

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That's very insightful and actually super helpful with the example... But I guess I can't spam emotions too much, you can only have that much emotions...any other methods? "Emotional depth is not a bottomless well; we must be careful not to draw from it faster than it can refill." - Sudden...

Backlog too large :er_what_s: I have a major problem in which I require readers to point out my mistakes quickly so I can fix them. I can't identify my own issues due to narcissism. *Which of course is a very bad thing Edit : Ok, I remember now that self-loathing is usually quite uncouth, I...

I can't help it. I'm too excited at writing new plots. Edit : Will post less frequently. My posting schedule is messed up.