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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Ok, ok... You are doing mighty fine. It's only now do I realize that you strike me as hostile. Anyways, I appreciate the feedback.
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    I understand your point of view. I understand that my writing looked chaotic to you. Well, for me, it was too... I've been in three rewrites and over, so I know the pain of reading them. Meanest Mob is more of a philosophical undertaking in the isekai genre on my part, English is also my second...
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Here will be fine
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Okidoki, I might as well go for broke, I'll throw another one. Everlasting Mage Totally a different genre. This isn't really how I wrote it though?
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    Dear Readers, help pick my next novel!

    The last one. It has that 'masterpiece' opportunity to it. I don't have any constructive reason as to why. My guts just told me so, well... I think it hasn't been done yet, that's why. The first one is a tad bit similar to my novel 'Everlasting Mage', so no? Well, my MC isn't a merc, and there...
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    What is the most common sight you see in your city/place?

    For me, it's people trying to find jobs... They are everywhere.
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    What is a good word count for a single chapter?

    According to my research which the same standard I follow. A lightnovel per volume is between 40k to 60k. Their are some 70ish k. Following this standard, I aim to write atleast 1k per chapter if I were to aim the midpoint of 50k words. It's a good way to maximize your chances for more to...
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    Is your grandpa a badass?

    Just an add-on. Meanwhile, my grandfather on my mother's side is a fisherman. He provides food, house, and happiness to his family. Has 13 children, all women... also has the vices of drinking and smoking harsher than my father's grandpa... He died of old age. Also a badass, no?
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Meanest Mob Sorry about that. Just do it here, for all world to see.
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    Is your grandpa a badass?

    My grandpa has a sad backstory. He is a bastard son of a father he sought acknowledgment but was never given attention. His father was a successful man, a scientist even. The said grandfather even managed to get a valedictorian in high school despite the lack of a mother, and his father's total...
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    People thinking your profession is magic

    If 'student' were a job, then I can share... Most often, People always think that I have good grades.
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Hey, can you do Meanest Mob, it's in my signature
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    Most used English word.

    Kakorrhaphiophobia...
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    Post a paragraph!

    Sometimes, the biggest stranger in our lives is ourselves... What should I do next? Should I do this? Is this the right thing to do? Just who am I? -From Meanest Mob
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    How does your 'Characters' laugh?

    Depending on your 'character' whether it be good, neutral, chaotic, evil, or just plain wacky... they have their own versions of how they laugh. Fellow writers, I'd love to hear your Characters' versions. With this thread, I hope to glean a bit of your artistry. So that I may imitate...
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    What should a regressor be like?

    Reticent, depressed, have a mental illness, edgy, OP, knows his stuff, possesses almost prophetic knowledge, has either a hero complex or is extremely selfish, likes the color black, and most often an immovable guy that seems to lack any emotions at all.
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    Enemy or Ally?

    Yep, I am mighty fine!! Just chilling, and sinking in self-reproach... All is well, all good things must come to an end, and vice versa I hope.
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    Thoughts on the industrial revoltuion

    I can explain. I just hate Dance Dance revolution, and I believe, if the industrial revolution didn't happen in the first place-- Dance Dance Revolution won't even exist... Is it far fetch? I can't just imagine it the other way around.
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    What Covers Attract your Eyeballs?

    The art of click baits huh? You are treading into dangerous waters, my friend... I advise you to be careful. If you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you- remember the wise man's words, for one day, it just may't save your life.
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