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  1. JayMark

    Moo Principle #243 - Anyone got any recomoomendations?

    Moo Principle #243 - Anyone got any recomoomendations?
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    He should have disguised himself as a hairy porter.

    He should have disguised himself as a hairy porter.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I'm winning by adding another chapter.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I just watched that video yesterday. :oops: I'll do my best to not suck.
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    No wonder that man is always nuking my peaceful tech culture civ with a massive first strike.

    No wonder that man is always nuking my peaceful tech culture civ with a massive first strike.
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    tomayto / tomahto

    tomayto / tomahto
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    Moo Principle # 242 - Turn the other cheek.

    Moo Principle # 242 - Turn the other cheek.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Unavailable video. I just can't win. MOO!
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    Yeah, I go back and reread my action scenes and find them boring and clunky then I rewrite them...

    Yeah, I go back and reread my action scenes and find them boring and clunky then I rewrite them. Visuals rely on reader imagination, though I want to be able to make at least a manga scene in my head. I also try to tie it into the narrative. I think your example of faceslapping was good, if two...
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    I also agree with you that fights should have narrative consequences that can't just be hand...

    I also agree with you that fights should have narrative consequences that can't just be hand waved away, so I have a little trouble with over powered healers.
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    I like fight scenes, and I've liked isekai and portal fantasy before it was market flooded. I...

    I like fight scenes, and I've liked isekai and portal fantasy before it was market flooded. I agree we do have too many of these types of stories and not enough new sci-fi stuff. I put out a sci-fi and it bombed so I'm seeing if i can't rework it because I wrote it when I was very young.
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    I'm playing this game.

    I'm playing this game.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    For now. Never trust big corporations that work in lock step with world governments. Even more so if they produce colorful happy sounding games with characters we've come to love because of our childhood and appeal to our lizard brains. Even more so if those characters are ubiqitous. The core...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    moo
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    Trash Panda Appreciation Thread

    Is this your sock?
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Without pain and struggle, you don't grow. One of the reason I hate many Litrpgs and power fantasies.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I don't even need to break out the roast beef jpeg.
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    I was hoping I'd hit that 1 percent legend class. It wasn't to be. But I didn't hit the bottom 80 percent so that's good. It's pretty rare that something reaches mediocre here.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I don't feel fully roasted, more like mild sunburn.
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Thank you. Showing Versus Telling: I actually take this very seriously, not that I don't tell ever, but I will rarely ever character tell. I actively fight against saying directly how a character feels. That's not going to change at this point, but sometimes I'll break down. Sometimes I'll...
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