what's unfortunate is that the author genuinely sucks at writing action scenes, it was sorta endearing the first couple times- like if you're watching a baby cousin try to help with chores, and now this is what, the 30th time or so an action scene has been shoehorned in? I can tolerate the flat...
reading a story for the bureaucracy but the author keeps on trying to shove fight scenes in like, dude, this isn't what I'm reading this story for. Keep to your strengths rather than force me to skim several chapters in a row because you thought a civil servant should do kung fu moves for some...
the first and only time I showed a teacher my attempts at horror I was sent to a parent-counselor meeting to see if I was feeling "troubled" so I think it was a fairly successful attempt
it was difficult to hold back the fact that assassin bugs stab and suck out the innards of their prey before stacking the corpses around their body to use as armor and camouflage, to avoid getting real visceral with the process and keep to just two sentences
I'm fiddling with a story concept and would like to hear reasons why someone would break up with another, scummier, person without going over the line (ex sexual assault, murder), it can include other crimes but keep in mind the line