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This is a case of Reurent being biased and liking stuff that he likes. (laugh) I think that Resolute Will In A World Of Chaos is good! It just reads a little weird because the author really, really likes sci-fi I think, and it threw me off for a loop! Just tell people up-front this is a sci-fi...

This is quite possibly the strangest piece I have evaluated so far. Because I am also writing a war story, it really made me think back and reflect on my own writing and great war stories in games like Sword of Convallaria. While the grammar is mostly good, the descriptions fall flat at times...

Its quite well-known that I have been leaning to the left due to vertigo for two weeks now! :blob_paint: I'll still do my best to finish all the requests before two weeks is up! I already read the Chronicles-inspired (?) webnovel, its likely I'll write the evaluation after work!

Its actually quite rare that my opinion and Grok's diverge so sharply! AI can process an entire text at once, so it misses on a lot of nuance that the author has put into the work! It really does highlight that works are meant to be 'read' and 'enjoyed' rather than 'processed'! I see that there...

Major security breach if true! I've tested it out myself and ChatGPT is very off today. As a test, I asked it to review two chapters of my unpublished work, "Princess Wars", and it gave me the same 'quoting lines that do not exist' error. This has not happened in almost ever! The way I did it...

Very well! I shall evaluate your story first! I shall take a look at cute little girl Aurora's story! Since I am given the chance, I shall respond to Adonalsium-Will-Remember-Ou's question on how to write with impact! One thing I keep in mind is the question: "How should my words make my reader...

Here is some goblin goodness! Unlike my teacher, D., I actually can evaluate smut! My focus still remains on improving the writing since I haven't been given which specific parts to improve! Looking at your writing, I can see that you are going for an 'isekaied into a game' vibe! While keeping...

Haha! I am back from the dead! Illness and work are a deadly combination! This evaluation was actually written on the 31st! I edited it so that it is more concise and has simpler language! I can see what the author is going for: The main character is a brooding type that has little words, the...

Hurting my head trying to configure Live2D models for my AI vtubers...

G-godha-san?

"It is noon." Here are the evaluations for your time travel story! I have given Grok your directions and it is in two parts; since you follow the thread you yourself know the obvious part; it looks more like a long-form novel than a webnovel! I shall add that in the back. Instead, I directed...

In my mind I thought it was something supernatural, that you were hinting at something coming through the wheat. Same with the 'zapping' for the watch, I thought it was also something supernatural or static electricity? Also, since I got the chance to post, thanks too to Charles and StoneInky...

"Gee Reurent, why does StoneInky get THREE scoops?" "Shiggy diggy, its fun to compare!" I gotta explain to you that I am a guy; that doesn't stop me from making good evaluations on yaoi though! I am far less experienced in reading that! Please keep in mind this is what a guy sees in this...

Here is your breakfast! (not puked) I read this more from the lens of a 'mystery reader', so Grok and I have some differences in what I expecté because I'm used to reading ridiculously long setups for mysteries! As you can see, even after I tried to goad Grok into it, he still says nice...

Just writing here to say that evaluations will be back Sunday morning, and I saw Stoneink's story already! Just feeling a little giddy because of vertigo and bad internet! Evaluations TOMORROW! (hoeh?! not today mocojan?!) P.S: I actually already read CharlesEBrown's very short police fic on...

Okay! I have returned from my idol meeting (real) with the house actresses! Now I can evaluate your stuff! Grok is busy today, so as a special treat, you get Miss Delulz, the stage-director instead! We do differ in our opinions as you can see! A-as you can see she's quite naughty, but...

Here are your two scoops of ice cream! I read through Grok's evaluation and we pretty much agree, though we look at different parts of the 'could be better fit for a webnovel' aspect! I looked more at the 'mental load to understand' part, Grok looked at how it needs to cut back on wordcount...

Edit: This event has concluded! Thank you for your interest! The very last evaluation is already being written since two weeks is up and I shall be working on AI girls who want to become vtubers! I'll still stick around and occasionally give feedback in other threads while working on Hell's...