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  1. sanitylimited

    I need advice on a book I'm writing.

    what seperates a good hero from a good vilain is the price they are willing to pay to achieve their goals. ie a good guy protagonist will have his father conviently have his father die before his birth, thus allow him to fill in the void of her lonly heart whereas a vilain protagonist will...
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    I Need Advice on Creating a Mental World

    in the game 007 golden eye the first mission is dam. now the water can represent the held back tears. the soldiers can represent the protagonist not wanting his dam to be changed and his harem can build a floodgate alowing an apropriate amount of tears to come out without completly destroying...
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    Trope: Your new power is altering your DNA

    ether i become a bullet proof imortal or die. ether way i no longer need to pay tax its a win win situation
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    Trope: Your new power is altering your DNA

    oh right. i read something similar. his powers changed his genes meaning their would be no problems impregnating his mum
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    Notadates not arts, but totally masterpiece S

    the tongue of a deadly anphibian
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    reborn as a loli Jiraiya

    the problem is jiraya was an abandoned orphan, thus has no mum or sisters or aunties etc to lewd. your story is flawed from the start
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    Are people afraid to write reviews?

    im far too negative to write reviews. when a author decides to mix things up to make things interesting my first thought is generaly "this is retarted, convoluted bs" how can a sword who cant smell or taste cook better than profesional chefs. thats just stupid. a whole volume about a sword...
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    What does this mean to you?

    the good feeling you feel is god tiping you. he likes what he sees. he doesnt kink shame
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    What does this mean to you?

    i don't understand it, or how it benifits anyone.
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    Writers: Pet Peeves When Reading Novels

    i read a dragon ball fanfic where they go off to deal with the red ribon army after unlocking god ki. i can't stand when the protagonist slaughters countless foder, only to let the main antagonist live, just to make sure more plot can happen because of that character
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    Can your MC beat Goku tho?

    the rules for current goku is goku will lose the first fight the second fight will be a draw the third fight he will win hell even krilin beat goku in their first competition (a race). so prety much anyone can beat goku in their first encounter due to the power of holding back and...
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    Wizard story advise sought for... Thanks

    use the tags/fuinjutsu from naruto. from pages of storing, pages of fireball etc.
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    Do Instinctive Writers Exist?

    i dont plan because id never get past the planing stage. and converting a planned out story into a story is far too boring and tedious
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    Vote

    this reminds me of that stupid slime, where their are no bad people, only brain washed/mind controled people. and the main antagonists goal is to make the protagonist stronger.....a more retarted version of journey to the west in a way. you thought you where controling me, but no.. youu are...
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    Vote

    the third forth option is a picture of the corner of a stop sign. im not sure if i need to select it or not
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    How to show the authors why readers are kings:

    you are a fool. kings can be guilotened, pupets can not. kings still exist. they just call themselves oligarchs now. flexing their power in the back whilst pushing the blame onto their employees(polititians).
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    Female reincarnated in a dark erogame

    can she have a penis? (futa)
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    Guns in fantasy

    i cant stand guns in fantasy. instead of improving yourself, you can only improve the tools you use. thus you remain weak. that isnt fantasy, its delusional bs. siting down in meditation for hundreds of years is far superior to guns, thats how much i hate guns.
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    Recommend Three Novels

    the mathew reily books have sequels. one of his series is a trilogy. temple i think the name is
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    Recommend Negative One Novels

    i recomend every generic japanese pg rated smut novel. ie highschool dxd. its amazing the lengths a teanage boy will go through to protect their virginity, whilst still being interested in colecting a harem
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