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The quack is quacking. Quick! Someone give him a goose to fight with! @Fairemont About your novel. I have only finished one chap of yours. All I could say is: Put a warning that recommend reader who doesn't want their immersion to be broken to look away. The glossary part is fine, helps...

The best feedbacks are praises. The worst feedbacks are getting none. Now flip the word 'best' and 'worst'. If you got two reviews, then they're fighting for the third place of the worst feedback. And also, don't get battered by them. You expected one of them, by the way. Grow a spine.

@Roeyachi Good start, nice pacing. Easy to differentiate which is which. Nice. I can't comment further, because I haven't looked past chapter 1, so you only get this much. Though, I must say, there's not much interesting thing going on with the writing. It's just... Felt like I've seen it...

@Peagree Absolutely! What's the game? @Peagreene Both of these are short stories? ... Incredible. Short stories are different from novels. They don't serve endings or clarity, they serve meaning. And you, my friend, have become my favorite short-stories author. 8.5/10. The first story, I...

You handled the dialogues real well, I'm surprised. Seriously, good job. I dig into the way your characters talk to each other. Felt so natural, I started thinking that you might have already done this before. The truth novel? Wait, hold on, let me check my list. @Nevafrost Uhmm... Excuse me...

... I said... Where is the character tone? The one that makes each character at least a little distinct? Are you even serious at writing this? I take it you don't. ... You're as miserable as the Backstreets of The City. You know what? Unleashing at you now feels like a waste of energy and...

@Jaymi To be honest, I was expecting a lot of self-insert at first. But no, you hooked me. I don't know why, but this more-dialogue style somehow fits your narrative. Seriously. My brain somehow able to play the scene imaginarily. Your words evident, making me easy to see what they're doing...

@Playerkartik About your oh-so-great MC. Let's start off with how you depicted him. Boy raised in a village orphanage? Passable. In a fantasy world? Nevermind. Gets something that would leap his power to beyond the skies in later chaps? Literally every single fantasy creeps manhwa. Pacing...

He already admitted defeat. Though, you can wait here and prepare some popcorn. I'm currently reading through this corny ass boy's story for the purpose of telling him that I am different from his MC. Sorry, this is butchering thread. Lmao.

THEN HOW THE FUCK ARE YOU READING THIS POST??? OKAY, READING MIGHT BE AN OVEREXAGGERATION!

I really wish the MC's not a copy of corniness of you.

... You read, tho. Read. ... You never listened when you're reading this. ... Duh.

I will not even question about why you behave like this.

Alr, piling it up to the list. Just wait for me to butcher it. Why are you here?

You know what, pale gurl, I'm on your side about this kartik.