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Seems so.

Great. Good job being the person to do that.

Holy f*ck. The joke went over your head. Sure, girl. Sure.

Just what I need. And yes, my stuff needs trimming. Especially the grammar since I am but a native English speaker. Gonna need to look up the rules of tenses again. And about the MC, I think I got the correct reaction here. Yes, it was told that the MC is proficient, but there hasn't been...

I ain't doing that. No. Not without a consolidation prize as a tradeoff of losing virginity, anyways.

I ain't crediting you next time my friend asked me where this quote came from. Smh.

Sure, hag. ROFL

A moon lady? Since when the moon got feminized? And does that mean I can call you a hag? Since the moon is centuries old by now, even millenia. Lmao.

Another good advice from @HungrySheep

If you aim to make atmosphere, then I suggest reading synopsis that makes you feel immersed just by reading it, as if resonating with the character narrated there.

@Jaymi Alice have set a good example about this. You should look her synopsis up (the Scribble Hub one) and see if that fits your style. @AliceMoonvale Don't act surprised, you stinky two-faced fox. As if I don't know fox kind tend to have superior abilities at speech and persuasion. Also...

One, yes, you are overthinking it. Second, diagnose what makes you feel like your synopsis isn't good enough for you, on the technical side. Is it the deliverance of the wording? The clarity? Or maybe just grammar issues? Third, diagnose the synopsis from the readers view. What do they expect...

LMAO

Actually, what the fuck? You expect a shrimp making out with a guy with clock head?

Can to.

Motherf*cker suggested them reenact the Titanic scene, lmao. I can't.