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  1. RepresentingPride

    22 readers, 707 views... 0 reviews and 1 rating (my own)?

    There not realy review swap here. You must know that most reader are silent reader and won't rate/comment your story. You can try to ask them at the end of your chapter. I did that one time and some started to comment/rate.
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    Weaponizing gods and religion

    You have the pantheon of the Romans, the Amerindians, the Celtics, Mesopotamians, etc. You also have the sephirot of the cabal in Judaism (if I remember right) which are used in the manga 666 satan (underrated btw) with the cabal representing the angels and the reverse cabal representing the...
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    thanks, someone already share it to me a few days ago to help me in my writing.

    thanks, someone already share it to me a few days ago to help me in my writing.
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    My last attempt

    I don't know which novel you read, but you just have to look at our history to see how far humans can go even with their "allies" it's not strange that authors describe humans in all the stories are grey/ half bad. When you come to a fantasy novel, they're a hierarchy of races if you want to...
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    Free feedback thread.

    Thanks!
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    Free feedback thread.

    I think this is one of my biggest problems when I write. I’m bad at describing or writing interactions between two characters. For dialogue tags, I try to use them only when it is really necessary. They appear more often in the last chapters. I personally thoughts when reading that too much of...
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    Which Sounds Better, "Fire Witch" or "Flame Witch?"

    Crimson Witch Embercaster Blazeborne Flameheart Blazebringer Incantatrix of Flames Flame Enchantress Red Flame Witch Monarch of Flame witch Ember of the Sun Solar Ignition Witch Solar Scioness Sunscion Enchantress Radiant Witch Radiant Heiress
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    Puppet's Feedback Thread (pay with comments)

    Thanks for the feedback. I don't know if you have read the synopsis, but there I said that it's my first time writing a story, and English is not my first language, which may be why I have problems with the flow/grammar. Also, the chapters already released were from months ago, I don't know if...
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    Puppet's Feedback Thread (pay with comments)

    Here my story if you want to do feedback/review/rating. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/815788/crystal-evolution/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Hi! Are you still giving feedbacks? I'm a beginner writer and would like to have some feedback. Thanks! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/815788/crystal-evolution/
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