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  1. MatchaChocolate69

    Changing point of view

    When I can, I prefer to give each POV its own chapter, but sometimes the chapter isn't long enough, or in a scene, I want different POVs to be visible. Also, the narration and thoughts, in my case, are limited to those of the character who is the POV at that moment. In these cases, I treat the...
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    Recommendations literally in Hell

    It's an experimental novel I wrote to participate in a writeathlon. Unfortunately, it didn't receive much feedback, and it's currently on hold as I'm focusing on another story. I would like to continue it and maybe rewrite it.
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    Recommendations literally in Hell

    Is it okay a metaphorically speaking hell? The protagonist suffers suffers a lot, like all survivors. Shameless self-promotion: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/875321/-c-surviving-hell-earth/
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    My little reading corner. Story feedback. Quality not assured. Opinions reign supreme.

    Sorry for the ot, but you reminded me of this splendid artwork by Carlo Carrà.
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    Readers..

    I could reuse this poetic proe poem. :ROFLMAO:
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    Rewards for milestones

    P*rn or wasting time on youtube
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    @SailusGebel That's bad

    @SailusGebel That's bad
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    I did not know it. Thanks for the suggestion, from the first chapters it looks very interesting

    I did not know it. Thanks for the suggestion, from the first chapters it looks very interesting
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    Before you swear off sugar.

    I'm sorry, my friend, but as much as refined sugar makes everything taste better (and I know it well), it is truly poison. You can immediately notice the difference once you detox from it. And it's not that you have to eliminate it completely; in small doses, only during main meals, you can...
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    What is your favorite era of Vampire lore?

    The best representations of vampires, according to me, are these: Buffy, Tv Show Underworld, Movie Blade, Movie Vampire: The Masquerade, Videogame Vampire Hunter D, Manga In particular, I think the vampire found in Blade, Underworld and Buffy is the one that I like the most. I would also like...
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    What is your favorite vampire subspecies? Do you like catpire?

    I'm responding seriously to a meme thread. Yes, I am the one who ruins the parties. :blob_party: I love vampires in all forms, except those that stand in the sun (unless they've performed a perverse ritual sacrificing thousands of lives to become a Vampire Ascendant).
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    I'm bored V.2 (to authors)

    Yes, I think it is very much like a dream. I see the characters, places, objects but not in a definite way. It is difficult to put into words. I need to improve in this fundamental of writing.... :ROFLMAO:
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    I'm bored V.2 (to authors)

    Semi-realistic movie, I guess. It's blurry, not defined
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    Best Fighting Scenes

    How cool are those two? This is one of those scenes I would aspire to write. You can never go wrong with Fate. You're a connoisseur! UBW and Zero, I think, have the best fight scenes. With a quick search, I found out that Zero is a novel written by one of my favorites: Gen Urobuchi. I haven't...
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    Best Fighting Scenes

    I love Ip Man, but I was looking for something more in the fantasy RPG realm, possibly with weapons and magic. The animated scene you linked is truly epic, woah. It would be suitable for the endgame, though. Describing it with words would be quite complex, trying to maintain the same level of...
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    Best Fighting Scenes

    I think I need to improve in writing combat scenes. The best way to learn is to observe the best and draw inspiration from them. I would appreciate it if you could point out the best combat scenes in your opinion, preferably scenes that are shown rather than telled, but I'm not picky. I would...
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    What songs are you listening to?

    https://www.youtube.com/live/leIK1aUOF-Q?si=OE90q2IapRreOcMO
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    What do you do when you hate a core part of your story?

    I believe it's positive when characters have flaws or commit ignoble acts, and it's interesting to see how they deal with it. It makes them human. If you want to make them more relatable, focus on showing their positive qualities. Then, put them in situations where they have to confront their...
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    The Drama Thread

    ^ This. But I like spicy, so I tend to exaggerate. I don't like bland soups. So for me, drama is necessary otherwise the story lacks conflict.
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    Come to the dark side, we have, you know, :blob_cookie:

    Come to the dark side, we have, you know, :blob_cookie:
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