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Alright I stopped at two beacuse there's quite a bit to unpack here mortal. For starters, we have to do something about your initial presentation. There's a reason your view count is fairly low. When I look at a story given to me by you humans, there are two things I look at first and foremost...

Ah this is the wrong thread, you wanna put that here: https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/the-hive-free-feedback-thread.16905/#post-372645

Note: Not talking about written out reviews, just when people click and give a star rating. 5 Stars - I really like your story and/or it was good. 4 Stars - Good story, but there's some grammatical errors here or there. Or the plot doesn't line up. Whatever the case, still gets a four, even if...

Yes. I would prefer a close third person but my readers want 1st so I cater to them. I still swap Povs though to mix it up.

Ok, this was umm, oddly fascinating. I also engage in polyamory, but usually my mates are left dead when I'm done. Not to mention the inclusion of this world of "Yu-gi-oh." It's my first time seeing such a unique story. I was sure you humans typically look down on sex work and the like. Anyway...

Insects. I must support my brethren.

I'm sick and can't do anything. Feels so bad:(

Well if it isn't the Vampire Queen herself. It's nice to get acquainted with fellow royalty for once. Especially one as great as yourself. As mentioned in a previous review, girl's love isn't my thing, but I was still happy to read. You vampires are very different from the stories most people...

Haha, I do not typically indulge in the love of two females, but this was rather interesting. I stopped at chapter 9, not because it got bad, but because I have other books to review. The pacing was a bit slow, but it helps to generate a continous desire to find out what, when, why, and how the...

Write in third person, and frame your story to highlight when a specific person is writing. If you want to share there thought's, do so before or after they speak on the same line/s, preferably in italic. Also nice pfp.

I wan to slep

Welcome to The Hive The Swarm Gives Its Greeting. I'm your resident Moth Mommy, Glitched, and I'm rather bored. The hive is filled with nothing but corpses and my insect children, so I figured I'd fill it with something entertaining to pass the time. That's right, books! Your books. I'm rather...

Quack for it first

Imo percent should be better since the novel might make $ off-site and then you would get a portion. Then again that's only good if you know its gonna make money. Otherwise per chap is better bcs you're at least getting paid for the work even if the novel doesn't gain traction in the english...

Is it just me or is there nothing there?

Somewhat. My mc is hellbent on killing humans ruthlessly, so not in that regard. But I do resonate with her care for those close to her. True

Lemme raise it, I'll take very good care of the child. I have lots of experience in childcare already~