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Isn't that just straight up Trevor from GTA?

You are going to make a bunch of low budget B-movies? Truly horrified right now.

The insane ones.

'There will be hell to pay' -- The First Infernal Bank of Hell is always willing to give out loans, free of interest to! Just don't miss your debt payments.

Teleported into the world of Calamity Mod Terrarria? Well besides taking a nose dive off the nearest cliff I would probably just do my best to idiot proof my world and never go towards the corruption or jungle.

I personally despise nihilism or nihilistic takes hope is something beautiful in world that is laced with corruption and malice. Regardless on the situation a returning hero saving a village from ruin is always something hopeful. Even if a majority of the village has died their is still the...

I ain't many of the most popular and successful authors were Christians, like C.S. Lewis the father of modern western portal fantasy and Tolkien who basically created a majority of the tropes we have come to love today. As to address the original post: Your review is understandable I understand...

In theory yes, it is banned. However, the amount of lax loopholes here are ridiculous and unless you manage to piss off quite a few readers or other authors to report it it will more than likely fly under the radar.

The sheer fact you recommended Kapal of all things... Makes my opinion of you grow even higher. That little hidden gem needs to be read more often.

Your prose and skill has certainly got better.

This reads like a journal entry turned into a story. The problem with beginning the story with " January Late Evening", is that it comes off as it is going to transition into a first person perspective. However it goes into third person, for instance it would be a lot less jarring by saying...

The closest thing I have had is a crush I had in fifth grade. Wrote her a note and gave it to her in person, and she just stared at me and said nothing, preceded to walk away. But to be completely honest I never had that whole 'tug on the heartstrings' type of love.

You are speaking to a big part of me. The idea of having a relationship forged in the heat of battle and having that unbreakable battleworn bond is already something that gets me going. But the amount of trust that quite literally puts your life in someone else's hands speaks to me a complete...

Kinda sad if you actually believe this, despite the inspiration in your story coming from something else that doesn't mean your work will never be original. There will never be another you and your story will always have a little bit of impact in regards to artistic expression and may even set...

Because copy pasting reality into a fantasy setting feels half baked and lazy, also coming up with something remotely unique is better than 'oh it is just *insert previous real world country here*'

By having a petty character step up to plate to get knocked down by the oh so righteous main character it enables for the author to flaunt some sort of moral superiority and the dominance of their character. As for the reactiveness of the main character it is just fairly common for them to have...

If you want to be realistic about it there is going to be a power vacuum and people are going to have to take the mantle of governance. Rebuilding will be needed, and shakey alliances may start to form in a bid to have a stronger control in this new magistrate and chances are some of the old...

Not as bad as one might think, it is certainly a genre here to stay and will be a great gate way for people new to the fantasy genre to pick up. After all isekai in its most basic format is someone from our world going to a fantasy land. It give the reader someone to connect to in this story...

Besides the whole not liking liars or manipulators I would say that voices are a big thing for me. Specifically very nasally or squeaky voices. I would rather listen to nails on a chalkboard.