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What did I do?

You never said words so true. If I spend half the time I use in this thread on my story, I would have written 20 chaps

You forgot an "S" :mad_s:

Do you see them at the same thing or for you, it's the same thing?

Go back, I said Baguette

You can use flashback, thoughts, or even discussion with other character while the lich tell the truth but everyone thought he lying, or you can even go with the misunderstanding type of discussion where everything the lich said is understand differently.

And here I thought I could get a cook...

French baguette, Beef, Onion, Cheese, maybe some sauce but not mayonnaise or mustard for me :blob_sir:

Well, good luck with it, readers tend to said that the chapter 2 and 3 are awfull. But if it's a genre you like, you may appreciate it, maybe.

Where the beef

I do the same when reading to be honest. Everything under 100 get read too fast and even 100 didn't took that much of time.

I don't think there any rules against that, it's fictions write what you want. Unless you glorify these acts, but even if you do it, if it's in the antagonist side or have a mean in the story I don't think there will be any problems with the rules.

With this school, the baby will be an eldritch being who will destroy the school when born.

My story are build with innate ability, but the cultivation inside it make those said ability evolve through the ranks in the way each individual "want" somehow. There tons of stories who use the innate ability system and are good, the characters inside these stories try to master these...