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Always be entertaining, however, the narative needs building moments as well. Your challenge is...
Always be entertaining, however, the narative needs building moments as well. Your challenge is to make the building moments entertining. Overt Prolonged Exposition is not allowed.- JayMark
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Moo Principle # 440 - Necromancy sucks. Don't take my word for it. Just ask anyone who's been to...
Moo Principle # 440 - Necromancy sucks. Don't take my word for it. Just ask anyone who's been to an undead brothel.- JayMark
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I've never once experienced an interesting scene and wanted to read the book or watch from the...
I've never once experienced an interesting scene and wanted to read the book or watch from the middle.- JayMark
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It's not that hard to find chapter one. If you only want certain scenes and not the full...
It's not that hard to find chapter one. If you only want certain scenes and not the full experience, don't complain about missing something. Some stories heavily rely on character change and progression, there's no point reading them from the middle unsless it's such an overly template...- JayMark
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Secrets of the one above game
The one above me is crying over spilt milk. lol.- JayMark
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The Last to Comment Wins
No, my head just burning and the flu been going around here. But I gotta at least finish this chapter.- JayMark
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I will draw you as a dancing ebi-fry.
I will draw you as a dancing ebi-fry.- JayMark
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The Last to Comment Wins
ughhhh, I might have a fever....- JayMark
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No more Praise Anon thread.
Don't let that mask fool you! Easily fooled cat!- JayMark
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The Last to Comment Wins
Yes, fat, greasy, zit infested, neck beard having, back roll bouncing, balding scalpers.- JayMark
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The Last to Comment Wins
I'm winnng by realizing it is cute people who like and have cute collectables. Well, there is another type person that hoardes them, they shall not be mentioned.- JayMark
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Moo Principle # 439 - Words can also hurt you if they come in the form of a sonic boom attack...
Moo Principle # 439 - Words can also hurt you if they come in the form of a sonic boom attack that splits eardrums and rips off skin.- JayMark
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Writing Handling extremely sensitive subject matter in fiction... how?
The horrors of human reality far outweigh anything writers are reasonably able to depict. The wonders of the human experience far outweigh anything writers are reasonably able to portray. Fiction broadens persepective while softening the journey. Unless you choose to believe lies, words can't...- JayMark
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- Forum: Discussions & Writing Tips