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  1. TheKillingAlice

    What do y'all use to write?

    Hm, it might be worth a try. And yes, I was talking about money when I said costly. I just saw something about a pricing system and how detailed the program was, so I was pretty sure it would cost a pretty penny. Performance is not the problem. But if it doesn't, it would truly be worth trying...
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    Envy's Free Feedback Thread [Thread Closed]

    I might murder myself here, but I think your rating system is funny. :blob_hide: That said, here a new story, barely anything there, but since I'm guessing it will take a while, so I will put it on anyway. In the thread is okay with me, just murder it if you want to. Would be very nice, vampire...
  3. TheKillingAlice

    What do y'all use to write?

    It does sound great, I just looked at Obsidian as well, but aside from the fact that it's probably costly once you actually want to use it to its fullest, I literally caved in seeing how complex it is. I suffer from a bit of a duality when it comes to computer programs and services. One the one...
  4. TheKillingAlice

    What do y'all use to write?

    Oh, they are all plug ins. That's a lot. I kind of respect the hustle. :blob_blank:
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    Doravg's free feedback thread (Closed to catch up with all the requests)

    I really have no idea what to expect, but if you take on the quest and the result destroys my story's rating, so be it. I hope you will take a look at my story, once you have time for it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/832336/the-crazy-daughter-of-the-dukes-family/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Oh, that's what you meant. No, actually I did that on purpose, to try it out. I didn't expect you to mean that specifically, because I just changed it about an hour or two ago? I don't have a good feeling for time, but it was late in the evening, since I didn't sit down to do anything at all...
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    What do y'all use to write?

    Uh, I write in Microsoft Word 2010 (it's a trusty version). When I'm writing on the go, I use Android Notes on my phone.
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    Free feedback thread.

    First of all, the embarrassment: Yes, it seems so. I will check it in a minute. Don't sweat it, I'm happy to see you come back to it anyway. A bit sad that it's not your cup of tea, but it's not like I expected it to be. To be honest, this story doesn't have paragraphs. It might be a weird...
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    How to write a certain scene?

    That approach is also very versatile. You can either instill a sort of fear or disgust for the person eating on a personal level with the protagonist, or shave away at the foundation of the food itself, by bringing to light that the food that "we" had all been enjoying so far has been brought on...
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    How to write a certain scene?

    It always depends how I write, that's not the important part. It's not about making the character disgusted, but by extension, making the reader disgusted with the person eating. In this case, out of the feeling of sympathy to the dog. Having the dog croak away like this, while eating fancily...
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    How to write a certain scene?

    If it's not about behaviour or looks of the people in the scene, or the food itself, context truly matters. Imagine a scene in which the new butler is serving his posh, good looking, noble new master. (I haven't had a scene like that and didn't write something of the sort in a while, also, I'm...
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    AI tips and tricks thread

    Depends. I'm incapable of getting the AI to do as I want, so I consider it not very simple. :blob_teary:
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    AI tips and tricks thread

    It might not actually be that hard. It's pretty straight lined. I mean I'm at work, looking at this through my phone, so maybe it looks different.
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    AI tips and tricks thread

    Can't you try cutting out the background from one picture and stitching it into the other? Just make it blue then. Don't know what it would look like, but it could fit well.
  15. TheKillingAlice

    Writing Prompt Finish The Story: The Final Battle

    9mm handgun. If it can't end your pain, you can at least end yourself. :blob_popcorn:
  16. TheKillingAlice

    New Series Comment Request Thread

    :blob_aww: Thank youuu. I like it too :blob_melt: I just really identified with Alice in Wonderland, so I wanted it to be the last name. To refer to me as Alice, as you would to Bundy or Gacy. It kinda stuck. :blobrofl:
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    New Series Comment Request Thread

    Lol, but then it can't have been me. I haven't written any long running stories outside of my native tongue before CrazyDaughter. :blob_frown: Well, one, but in the same time frame and that one was canned to be reviewed and rewritten soon after its conception. So that can't be it.
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    New Series Comment Request Thread

    Nah, it'll be fine. I think :blob_cookie: HS?
  19. TheKillingAlice

    Real Names Reloaded

    My name is the name of a flower. I bet neither of my parents would even recognize that flower if it jumped in their faces. I know the name was quite popular in birth year, so there's that. It's not like I hate it, but I don't like using it, because I have a lot of bad memories with that name...
  20. TheKillingAlice

    Mc gender

    Prefer male. Gay male.
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