I am glad to have Iris by my side but it is a pity that they are not by Azure's side since they are married.
However from the point of view of the scene it is better the way you did because it comes out balanced.
The amount of detail is absurd! I can only imagine how desperate it made you to add them to Midnight, between wings, X-shaped irises. There's also the Scarlet Apple, your gray lock, and Azure's hand marking her property.
What immense work.
The concept of romance stripped down to its bones is that of two people who meet and interact, and realize they like each other.
You should focus on the reasons why they like each other, and on their progressively getting closer.
It depends on the writing style, but there should be two...
Suffering in agony, as it's not possible to change time optimally. Any choice or alteration leads to entirely unexpected consequences, the so-called butterfly effect. Not to mention plot holes, inconsistencies, paradoxes. When you touch time, you know you've majorly f*cked up.
I hate that damn shitty brat En
I guess we will ?
We switch to the ultra-hard mode, huh :sweating_profusely:
Time to introduce you to my family, then.
ELDRITCH FAMILY