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A cover that match its tone

It not the problem of him seeing as strong but him need to be in a disadvantage at the start, being experience give him that advantage thus lowering the stake, of course you can make him experience but the monster that you introduced at the start isn't that threatening enough, you could of made...

Doesn't that sound like real life, you have a crush on someone, then some random guy/girl you don't know got in a relationship with him/her, and in an important event it didn't involved you cause you were anxious or it wasn't your own business to care/you're not charming enough.

I skimmed through it and it still hurt my head somehow.

The lack of stakes(all 20 chapter) is what made it boring, knowing that he's a soldier, when he facing was facing the goblin/hobgoblin/wolf you don't feel like he was in danger, maybe it because of those monsters always been the small fries in other stories. And he was able to killed 5 of them...

Focus on making a great characters, worldbuilding should be the least of the problem. So don't worry about how you should write the magic system/what kind of race inhibit the world/what other dimension it have.

That can sometimes makes a story worst, so be careful with this advice cause you'll end up making a mary sue.

One of the problem with most harem is that, most of the protagonist isn't empathetic for the reader, makes you think 'does he even deserve having all this women love and affection thrown at him?' Some said it's because of Beta MC that made it intolerable but making him a sociopath with a fuck...

Bruh, you just describing one of many ways to do conflict. (Psychological conflict.)