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    I need feedback on my story

    Hi, everyone.... I fixed the punctuation errors on chapter 01 to 05 using Grammarly and tried my best to write long descriptions in chapter 07. Can anyone review at least Chapter 06 and 07 compared to initial chapters Thank you in advance...
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    Tried writing more descriptions this time with chapter 06 and 07, could someone please review it?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Thank you in advance, If possible compare it to chapters 1,2,3 and give me feedback. I'm considering whether to delete the story and start again, Since I have to now re-edit each chapter...
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    Changed the writing, is it better now?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Hi everyone! This is my first novel, many people pointed that earlier chapters lack description and detailing and was like a script of a play So I tried to change the style a bit, from...
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    Long explannations vs Fragmented sentences Need help

    As a new Author I struggle a lot with balancing these 2, I have written a novel in SH https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ But I got 2-3 feedbacks saying too little detail and hard to follow. And my writing style tend to...
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    First novel, I need some help

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ I uploaded my novel, I got 3 readers and 2 favourites and around 50 views (idk but when I click chapters it shows only 7 views, I guess views doesnot equal read) in one day. is my story...
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    Chapter 04 is up! Feedback please!

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Thank you in advance :s_smile:
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    Need a story review

    https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/163459/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters This is my story 3 chapters are up! 4th will follow soon Can anyone review my story upto now?
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    New to platform and to writing

    I published my novel on this platform (First one) In my dashboard, it shows the novel but when I search for it in the search bar it never comes up, Is it because SH doesnot update on real time? Still my dashboard shows 0 views but 1 reader...
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    3 Chapters up! Can anyone review my story until now?

    Fixed the pre isekai part still feel bit iffy though https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/
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    New to writing... Can anyone give their feedback on my first novel (An comedy Isekai)

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2293590/stuck-at-level--by-choice--dont-ask-my-sister-how-she-feels-about-it/ 4 chapters uploaded... 5th will follow soon Feel free to dessimate the story, Dismantle it, completely destroy or anything! Advices regarding how to improve the craft are highly...
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    New to writing... Please help (Regarding publishing and Marketing)

    Hi everyone, I'm a new Author, I have started writing not long ago (about 2 years back). I have a main novel I'm working on but I'm not confident enough yet to start publishing it :rolleyes:Since I feel the story is better and It still excites me to write Since I was scared to start publishing...
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    New to writing, Please help

    I'm constantly facing this problem If you asked me to describe an emotion, I can do that. even 'show don't tell' stuff I can work it out If I analyze beat by beat... I have written each beat ok But the problem is combining these things Let's say I cam across a something flat and uninteresting...
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    New to Writing, Help needed

    I am new to writing, I started writing a story. Which is in the fantasy genre. I started writing as a hobby but still catching up on most of the skills. I decided to do that while writing the story. I'm currently writing the story forward while revising the previous chapters, Hoping these...
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    Can Someone review my writing

    I am new to writing, I started writing a story. Which is in the fantasy genre. I started writing as a hobby but still catching up on most of the skills. I decided to do that while writing the story. I'm currently writing the story forward while revising the previous chapters, Hoping these...
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