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  1. TheKillingAlice

    Something that is written very elegantly.

    I mean, I'm sure I could provide you with a story that will leave you struggling to understand it. But if it has to be written well, I might not have one after all. :blob_cookie:
  2. TheKillingAlice

    Mixed feelings about a message i recieved.

    Color me surprised. That is my surprised face, I assure you. :blob_cookie:
  3. TheKillingAlice

    Mixed feelings about a message i recieved.

    Uhm, well. That's... a massive price tag, not gonna lie. :blob_cookie:
  4. TheKillingAlice

    Mixed feelings about a message i recieved.

    Did you find out? :blob_cookie:
  5. TheKillingAlice

    Does writing novel longer make us lose our ideas and exhausted?

    I'm shocked as well, sometimes. :blob_cookie:
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    Mixed feelings about a message i recieved.

    What the hell :blob_cookie:
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    Does writing novel longer make us lose our ideas and exhausted?

    Not really - at least not for me, so it already can't be a general thing anymore, as it doesn't affect everyone. I have so many ideas, I know I will never be able to tell them all, especially not at my current pace, but even if I did write a bit more efficiently. As a writer, I have myriad of...
  8. TheKillingAlice

    What's the hardest part of being a writer to you, and what common writer woes don't make sense to you?

    I wanted to call it "writer's block" but your words sum it up, so I second that. I can come up big stories and a full-on lore on a whim; I can imagine scenes down to the tiniest detail, but as soon as I sit in front of a blank page, I just end up staring at it. I have wished for stories to just...
  9. TheKillingAlice

    Writing How to write a Character that is a poet?

    What do you wanna exorcise? :blob_cookie: Well, Poe in general was a strange man and it reflected on his work. It always depends on who you portray. Is it someone with many demons? Or a young artist, who's just a fledgling? Is it a person of today or historical? Because people talked very...
  10. TheKillingAlice

    One star on chapter two.... at least give me a chance mannnnn (ratings rant)

    So that's how it is. I cared so little, all I knew was that they had some relevance, because for the longest time, there was a ratings war going on with my main Webnovel. Every time I got a 5-Star Review, within the next 30 to 60 minutes (at max) I'd get a 1-Star as a follow up. So when I saw my...
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    One star on chapter two.... at least give me a chance mannnnn (ratings rant)

    I've known this shit from RR, but they do it here as well? But ratings are basically irrelevant to most writer's here, I thought? :blob_cookie:
  12. TheKillingAlice

    How's my cover and synapsis?

    It's not technically bad, but I'm wondering: How is it that people call him a demon? Why, if he saves them time and time again? It might just be the Hancock-effect or whatever, but I refuse to believe that people just think of their savior as a demon for no reason. And what caused them to...
  13. TheKillingAlice

    I’ll Critique Your First Chapter’s Hook (Honest Feedback)

    I'd drop my story here for you to pick it apart. I just changed a few things, specifically about the hook-factor of the Prologue and the first Chapter. Now, I need someone to assess if the end result stinks or not. :blob_cookie: Also, thanks for your kind services on this site. Have a cookie...
  14. TheKillingAlice

    Dumbest Comments You've Gotten

    Wouldn't be surprised if it was someone also on this very forum, not gonna lie. :blob_cookie: I gotta say, I love your way of replying, tho. :blob_cookie: Here, Cookie. 🍪 I, personally, am still hung up on a particularly stupid review, which I have already complained here about, because it's...
  15. TheKillingAlice

    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open]

    Well, I just went through the first chapter, trying to see it through the lens of what is or isn't important to the objective of the scene. As for that matter, she isn't actually that disoriented. She gathers herself up at the beginning, coming to the conclusion that everything is completely...
  16. TheKillingAlice

    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open]

    This was so on purpose. I had an obvious Gate, and I couldn't help myself. :blob_cookie: The thing is, a new reader put out that the addition of the "enhanced" beginning didn't give a lot either way. So I'm currently pondering to roll the change back - not entirely, because there is a bit...
  17. TheKillingAlice

    How Wild Can a Novel Get to be Published on Scribble Hub?

    Why do you keep yelling that at me? :blob_cookie: Also, no shade on some good gore and smut, but it must make sense, no? If it's just for the sake of being "wild and brutal", that just means you're an Edgelord.
  18. TheKillingAlice

    Story Final

    You shouldn't know how to start a story, if you don't know how to end it. :blob_cookie: Although it may reshape or change entirely over the course of the story, you need to have a goal; a safe haven. If you don't have anything you are going towards, you will put your story at risk of losing its...
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    ADHD feedback for your chapters

    Jesus wept. :blob_cookie:
  20. TheKillingAlice

    Means vs. End

    I made no choice on the poll, because I would say "both". :blob_cookie: Obviously, the way needs to entertain me, in order for me to gather up the motivation to see it through to the end - but if the end isn't worth it, I won't bother with the way either. Trust me, I've stopped watching one of...
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