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    Tense problem

    I prefer it like how a person thinks. If thinking about the past, then past tense, when thinking of the present, then present tense, and the same for future planning. I did X, I'm doing Y, I'll do Z.
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    Writing What makes a character unlikable ? ( An alternative to Yorth's thread)

    Yeah, that's societal plot. Thus my D&D drow example, where the concept is flipped on it's head, and women are in the lead, and men are second class citizens. Also their generally highly evil actions. Mainly because Loth is evil AF.
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    Writing What makes a character unlikable ? ( An alternative to Yorth's thread)

    There's a... (cough)few(cough) things that I can think of that makes a bad character. 1. The character never learns. It's fine for throw away idiots and generic thugs to not learn, but the main cast including villain should have the ability to learn from their mistakes. Example: Keitaro from...
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    What makes a good character?

    Good characters are ones who have relatable flaws and motivations for their goals. It works for all characters you want to go in depth with. And good stories aren't absolutely black and white. Nobody is greedy for greed's sake. People are often greedy our of fear for an unknown future, or...
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    What would the government do if there was suddenly superpowers.

    Deny them legal protections based off of not being human. Seize them and their families. All the testing including breeding. Make secret super soldiers to take over the world.
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