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  1. Indicterra

    You ever asked AI about which voice actors and live actors could portray your characters?

    Whoever it maybe But Morgan Freeman as indescribable All- mighty entity / Narrator/God is a must
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    toon

    You should have a very good story for that, and even then it is more complicated if you're seeking someone to do it for free But things gets a lot simpler if you're willing to pay the artist for their work
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    Need opinions on my first fully immersive system

    Systems are like guns, every extra number is an extra bolt and every extra bolt is every extra complication Keep it simple with a few rules would be my advice
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    Replying to Comments

    Doesn't the notification have a link attached to 'chapter comment' which will take you directly to the said chapter which has the comments? I find it quite an easy method
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    Seriously I feel bad about Akira Toriyama

    Nahh that's my head cannon now, twitter will not lie lol?
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    Seriously I feel bad about Akira Toriyama

    Talking about inspiring, The fucking cartels of Mexico declared one-day peace treaty to honour Akira Toriyama's death. Very few people outside politics wield such powers
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    I'm curious, what writing software do you (yes I mean you specially) use?

    It's you? My main is docs, since I use my Android phone it's the most suitable one I once used that but later abandoned it after a update. It didn't sit well with me How is it now
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    I'm curious, what writing software do you (yes I mean you specially) use?

    'Tips fideora' Glad to see someone else same as me
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    You ain't trash buddy
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    What would be alternative suggestion ?
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    I would like to apologise?
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    Ahhh yes about that, I sometimes do that intetionaly to make the sentence longer and much more complicated and to make other feels like there is more context. Doesn't making it shorter make the paragraph shorter, how you as writer deal with that
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    Even then how do I reading will help me writing, many told me but I just don't get it. Maybe I am an idiot but I have read lot of good stories rowling, Tolkien, warhammer, alchemist. It's might have helped with my vocabulary expansion but other than that nothing has improved
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    This is part of my story, what do think Destruction…… despair……. Death. The Sky shone red like a bright ruby, The scorched earth glistened like black obsidian, the mighty mountains lost their contour as destruction chipped away their body, and rivers cried black tears poisoning the land...
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    Flair checks out. Is this where I get business cards or what
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    I actually tried that alongside with 'Do not tell. But show'. It's not working tbh, I don't know what I should take from them. Words? Or sentences as whole Mine is 1Pov
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    How to increase the quality of writing style

    I been trying write a novel, I have the story but I feel like my writing style is very bland. Like it's more of a report than story, I don't think the readers reading my story will get emotional on a level I feel when I read good story with great writing style. I tried to do more descriptive...
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    Any tips regarding creating a system

    Hmmm I have doubt How would you do 'a getting a skill' when you're on moments getting away from killed? Using the skill can save you and if it is a system you can justify the reason for getting the skill and your sudden proficiency in it. But if the system is there how will u justify it's...
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    Any tips regarding creating a system

    ' This is exactly what I want but I don't know how. The more I try to make it similar to the former the more it becomes later I don't know have reference material, any advice on how to achieve it
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    Any tips regarding creating a system

    That was a insightful comments thank u
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