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    Once, when spirits still lived in the old world, there lived a human woman named Dranigha. she was jealous of the magic of spirits and researched dark and dreadful ways to steal it for herself. Somehow she came upon it, and learned that ahe could drain it from their liveforce. It came at the...
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    The Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) (Now voting)

    Submissions are now closed! Voting will begin soon.
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    The Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) (Now voting)

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    Escapism

    The "seems" is just in case you happen to be someone who's been through similar circumstances and are currently riding a high of good health, or are otherwise failing to empathise properly with other people. Otherwise, there is no "seems".
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    Escapism

    ... Why did you ask if you don't really want to hear the answer? You asked, "Am I being too judgemental?" and the answer is "yes, you're being exceedingly judgmental and don't seem to know what you're talking about".
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    Escapism

    Sometimes "the way" is to lie in wait and/or take a break from your own mind. That means it's time for escapism. Finding "the way" if there is another method isn't always easy. In the case of abuse, all abusers work by crafting the illusion for their victims that they can't escape. Most will...
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    Escapism

    Some problems aren't so easily fixed. Depression, suicidal urges, abusive home situations, mourning a recently dead loved one... Sometimes people really do have to wait and bide their time until their problems come to an end on their own. Sometimes they just need a temporary break from their...
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    Less than 24 hours remaining until the Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) closes. Don't miss...

    Less than 24 hours remaining until the Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) closes. Don't miss the deadline~!
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    The Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) (Now voting)

    There are now less than 24 hours remaining to submit entries. There's a BST clock here if you need it: https://time.is/BST Once it hits 23:59, this competition will close.
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    Mind reviewing my novel?

    Hm... Is this yuri? :blob_cookie:
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    Razor woke to the feeling of soft, warm lips on his own. Lyre drew back from him with a smile, uust far enough to fill his sight with his own dazzling green eyes. "Sleeping with your binder on again? You'll hurt yourself." "What do you know?" Razor replied croakinly. He hadn't quite meant to...
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    "If I ever lose my mind... If I ever become a danger... Can I trust you to kill me?" He looked at her then, his soft eyes deep wit the seriousness of his words. Her stupid, irresponsible big brother looked at her with those eyes and softly smiled, as if he was whispering some soft and happy...
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    I learned that the hard way from my fanfiction days.

    I learned that the hard way from my fanfiction days.
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    The repetition of the word "she" doesn't bother the readers nearly as much as it does the...

    The repetition of the word "she" doesn't bother the readers nearly as much as it does the author. Unless it bothers you when you read back over it later on (with fresh eyes) or it causes some confusion as to who you're talking about, you're probably fine to leave them all. It's much more jarring...
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    Don't reply on this thread

    Boop :blob_evil:
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    Much improved

    Much improved
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    The broiling heat was unbearable. The steam from the mud rose up between them like a thick and ominous curtain. You could have counted the passing time by their panting, or the slow, rhytmic descent of the bead of sweat rolling down her back. "For the Qiueen!" "For Ancamoria!" "For a wife!"...
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    1 week remaining for those who want to enter the Yuri Garden Writing Competition~...

    1 week remaining for those who want to enter the Yuri Garden Writing Competition~! https://forum.novelupdates.com/posts/4964682/
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    The Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) (Now voting)

    For anyone interested, there's now 1 week remaining to enter~! I advise submitting a few days early in case you need to make last minute edits to comply with the rules.
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    How do you properly advertise your own work?

    Eye-catching signature advertisements, mentioning or recommending it when someone's looking for your sort of story, sliding it into discussion here and there where it's relevant... Basically everything I do to advertise the Yuri Garden and the Yuri Writing Help Room currently. It's also...
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