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Can you maybe check it? If its boring enough for first timer reader or not,because i've been reading This Chapter for like twelve times,maybe u can give me some feedback?

Can i just do that?, Actually its from chapter 2 to 3, In chapter 2 was about the origin of wrestling in cultivation world, I use story telling, while in chapter 3 i just dump all cultivation info progress on the beginning, like the mc is still low leveled,but must know this because she has a...

I think i have made a mistake in my first few chapter, like giving an information boom in first few chapter, and i think it make the reader feel bored,should i simplify that info boom?,that info boom was not too important too,like i dont want to rewrite it, it will confuse my reader, So, What...

Thank you, I will make sure to fix my synopsis first

Yes thats what i mean, i already setup a frame, So, its alright after all, Btw i like your video, I think They are very helpful, But can You like Making Your voice a bit clearer?, because i have to redo it to hear it right, Sorry if iam asking too much?

I use 1st pov For my Mc And 3rd for the other,but i think i have to use 1st for telling Flashback using Supportive character but is it the right thing?

Thanks you for answering, As for Gatekeeper, I think i See his name in poll on my novel,I think he is great,He also encourage me to keep improving.

Emmm, I dont Understand What is AO3? Iam still new so i dont know much..care to explain to me?. Also sorry to disturb you. Eeemm, Maybe they want to preach?Idk But Its not forbidden right?RIGHT....

Good idea, I will do that starting from now, Thanks for the advice

If i do that, The idea i was preparing will be gone.I Usually Just Write it on Single go.

So i want to make a flashback for certain supportive character, In that flashback, Explain what the supportive character think about the mc, So, Should I Use First person PoV?

Ugh i want to work there too,but i dont know how to get this job in the first place,as for accent it need time to be perfect, so dont be discouraged, i mean if you ask about your trainer too, she may be like you when she was starting

So you work as translator, i think it better to stay, i mean as a jobless myself,getting hired is already difficult enough, i think you should cheerish that job

I think its a good skit, I will try that, Maybe U can Read it Again To See if Iam Doing Great At it or not.Thank You for your advice i really appreciate it

Yeah,i think it make sense, but his situation maybe Lead him To curse in the first place, I want to change it, I Mean in the following chapter he rarely Swear too, Any advice on what to change it?, I want My Mc to be pure at the beginning but still has personality.

Did you know silkworm in growtopia?, its look cute, try to find it.

Thank you really, My imagination of swearing word are so little,This is the feedback I Really Need,maybe my reader is responsive, but i want to improve more I thought the title was Good, I Mean its the whole point Of The Story, Thank you thought, What Do You Sugest?. Actually I want It To be...

if you like gender bender stories, maybe you want to take a look at my novel, this is my first novel though. And i've been in need of feedback lately, because my reader just doesnt give me a feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1056447/i-want-a-harem-but-not-this-kind/

So ive been noticed lately, that The time you upload your chapter affect the number who can see your novel, so, what your optimal time?.