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  1. Kilolo

    Brick is evolving

    start from hard brick made of clay then fire mage found a way to make it sturdier by using explosion spell instead of regular fire spell to made those brick alchemist accidentally found out after spilling an extract of medicinal herb actually made it more solid, lighter, but just as sturdy they...
  2. Kilolo

    Justifying Character Decisions

    i think this is good enough tho? i am a lazy reader and oftenly skim a paragraph if they just repeating the same thing with same subtext. 2 paragraph or more would be indeed overbearing, but 2 lines like this should be fine. at least for me.
  3. Kilolo

    uhhhh, you don't like horror? i mean i find listening to a cute voice reading a horror story are...

    uhhhh, you don't like horror? i mean i find listening to a cute voice reading a horror story are somewhat entertaining.
  4. Kilolo

    not someone from big company, i watch/hear some vtuber from this agency called PRISM Project...

    not someone from big company, i watch/hear some vtuber from this agency called PRISM Project. some of them are into occult and do some horror reading times
  5. Kilolo

    i'm still lurking sometimes, lmao. been interested at vtuber lately

    i'm still lurking sometimes, lmao. been interested at vtuber lately
  6. Kilolo

    Writing Prompt You gain psychic powers invisibility, super strength, telepathy, telekinesis, teleportation, and x-ray vision. What do you do? Why? How is your life?

    tbh those kind of power you mentioned are mostly only good for personal benefit. if anyone found out it would incite suspicion and uneasiness among people. I would hide it and won't use the power at all.
  7. Kilolo

    Help me to choose protag in time travel story

    does the lore even matter? time travel (or from what your description it actually sounds more like a time leapt) is already a staple plot anyway. people read the stories for what the MC's do with their power, not how's they got it.
  8. Kilolo

    You are a scam merchant doing your thing

    shoot, I should changed my location to New Delhi before posting that.
  9. Kilolo

    You are a scam merchant doing your thing

    the best scam artist would always sell hope and dreams and would never peddling their product at the same place twice. it doesn't matter what i sell, what matter is : if it's what a customer wants, then i have it. see a cat lover that always being avoided by animal? sell them a perfume made...
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    Writing Prompt Five people have gone missing, the police can’t find anything. You, a private investigator, were hired to find them. Your first clue is in a cemetery.

    After I noticed the guy who standing alone in front of a tombstone I proceed to check, or at least pretending to check all the tombstone around him. after that I casually approaching the guy and standing by his side. the guy of course noticed me and turn his head around to my direction, to which...
  11. Kilolo

    Any suggestions on novels with badass mc?

    i can only think of saikyou juzoku tensei, although i don't know if the mc would fit to your badass criteria.
  12. Kilolo

    What the hell is litRPG?

    have you ever hear this old novel series called Goosebumps? it's a young adult horror novel book famous at America in the 90s, eachvolume of the books has nothing to do with the others despite having the same goosebumps tittle (we calling it oneshots nowadays) and some of the novel title has...
  13. Kilolo

    What the hell is litRPG?

    to be fair, some fandom stuff definition aren't described well by google. most of it are described in a way like reference book for highschooler/college student. I stop asking a fandom definition to google since I search about tsundere definition once, I search at forum, urban dictionary, or...
  14. Kilolo

    Writing AI characters

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/6949682-the-stories-of-ibis is the best novel about AI I ever read. the author depict the AI not as something flawless or hilariously flawed. but simply as an intelligent being within another spectrum. they do think, confused, having problem with...
  15. Kilolo

    Coolest weapon names

    one of my countrymen drew this, and he named this gun Pistol the joke is lost in translation, because it's basically a word pun by combining gun+pen*s in my country language.
  16. Kilolo

    Your Pickup Lines

    "I saw the title of the book you read the other day, so I look it up and try to read it. It was interesting"
  17. Kilolo

    What is one thing you would tell people if you time traveled 100 years to the past?

    I would tell people left and right that i'm an oracle who could see the future civilization. i would tell people that there would be great famine in ukraine, jews massacre in germany, then mass bombing in japan. i also would tell people that machine could think in the future, just like Alan...
  18. Kilolo

    Writing A co-author, but I don't care

    if you don't care then just be the ghostwriter
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