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  1. Arch9CivilReactor

    Final Draft: Alice Aegis

    (Image may not perfectly represent character.) I’m finally finished with the draft for one of the main character’s companions I’ve been introducing in my ‘Draft Idea’ posts. This is a card system battle academy that has students join together as ‘squads’ for various missions. Side note: The...
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    Is the username inspired by D. Gray Man?

    Is the username inspired by D. Gray Man?
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    Just Wanted A Brief Opinion

    Unlike a lot of writers on this platform, I actually see a story written like a story. Engaging and makes full use of their own writing style. This is a nice change of pace after reading that one a user posted (which sounded like a summary of exposition throughout the chapter) and deleted soon...
  4. Arch9CivilReactor

    Yogiri can be defeated?

    So basically… The personification of “End” meets the personification of “I don’t want to”.
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    Heroine Choice: Alice Aegis vs Tia Galarain

    I wouldn’t. Not to be mean to you specifically but more to people in general, but why does every SH forum always have a user who says to combine them as if that’s a big idea? Most of the time it’s also without any context to the post. How would I combine the two…? I simply can’t think of it due...
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    Heroine Choice: Alice Aegis vs Tia Galarain

    Why do they both sound like made-up names? It is because they come from the same base concept of ‘was experimented on by the final boss’. Except their personality and words are completely different. The two opposing paths. Both of them are students of a card magic academy, but one was adopted...
  7. Arch9CivilReactor

    Need Ideas For Character Draft

    Thank you. Definitely gonna check out those pages for inspiration. Seem like interesting tropes.
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    What's your main character's biggest flaw?

    Mine is that the MC is way too willing to do bad things he’ll regret later.
  9. Arch9CivilReactor

    Character Draft: Heroine, Version 1

    That sounds very interesting as a concept. Will keep that idea in mind while revising her. The ‘split in the past’ thing seems interesting.
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    Character Draft: Heroine, Version 1

    Hmmm… Maybe I should split them into two characters then. The evil side inheriting the traits of ‘being experimented on’ while the girl is just normal. The evil-now-good alter ego choosing to advise her in order to avoid a dead future.
  11. Arch9CivilReactor

    I need help with doppelganger

    I’m pretty sure there was a manga with doppelgängers as a main magic mechanic, but the anime version kinda ruined the source material by turning the MC into a high schooler. pretty sure it was called Black God.
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    Need Ideas For Character Draft

    Her super powered side has less a complicated power set and more like an ‘authority’. Controls space through this power. Her normal side has a more ‘normal’ power set based on the magic system of the story. Gun-wielder who knows Gunblade Kata thanks to one grandparent being a swordsman and the...
  13. Arch9CivilReactor

    Character Draft: Heroine, Version 1

    It might be a bit quick to make another post after my last one, but I did find the ideas presented to be amusing enough to make me creative. I’ve come up with a female character worthy of being a ‘heroine’ with these ideas that were suggested. Story Background: A card magic academy that makes...
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    Need Ideas For Character Draft

    Ah, that does sound interesting.
  15. Arch9CivilReactor

    Need Ideas For Character Draft

    Right now I’m working with a few plot device elements to create a character I can visualise in my head, but don’t have enough ideas at the moment to complete the draft. I’m finding it difficult to connect the dots because of that. So… The idea was based on the most shounen protagonist female...
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    Zombie Evolution Tree

    When I read this I start thinking about how zombies could either be mutants that are technically alive (just different as a species) or ghostly and spiritually possessing their own dead body. Maybe that could be a branch? A skill tree where you get closer to being a ‘magic being’ while the...
  17. Arch9CivilReactor

    Book with card based battle systems?

    That depends on the system mechanics you use for it. The ‘card’ part just essentially means turning magic into a possession, and the ‘game’ part is its own genre. People playing games is what I find difficult to imagine, but the former is easier since it’s simplifying the magic system. Depends...
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    Zoro from One Piece is lost and somehow ends up in your story.

    He cuts the baddies and saves the day, then leaves to get takeout (is never seen again)
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    Does your main character have some unique funny traits

    Mine is that he wants to be a gentleman but dresses like a thug because he doesn’t realise his sense of style is whack. Just generally being ignorant about how ‘cool’ does not equal looking good.
  20. Arch9CivilReactor

    I’m surprised we had the same idea about writing a card game novel at around the same time. I...

    I’m surprised we had the same idea about writing a card game novel at around the same time. I posted a bunch of ‘Draft Idea’ posts that shows exactly how my novel has been progressing lately. If you ever want constructive feedback on an idea. I’m definitely gonna be passionate about providing...
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