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  1. LostinMovement

    I was like 'Like seriously!'

    Imagine a story where all transported heroes travel through multiple dimensions to team up against their greatest nemesis, Truck-sama. I would totally read it.
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    Wanting to rewrite an already published story. Is that okay?

    Thank you @clover2218 and @NotaNuffian for replying. I think it might be best to keep the original and go ahead with the story as it is. I don't want to confuse my readers. and like you said @NotaNuffian, I can always rewrite it at a later note.
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    Wanting to rewrite an already published story. Is that okay?

    So, I have written something and I only have two chapters left until the end of the first arc (would be 25 chapters over all). Now, I can't help but be overwhelmed with the desire to rewrite it. I want to change some crucial terms, the prologue and the viewpoint of the narrative as whole before...
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    Please, to whoever giving stories a 1 star ratings, at least leave a comment or a review. Have...

    Please, to whoever giving stories a 1 star ratings, at least leave a comment or a review. Have the decency to actually explain why you think someone's story is shit.
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    Ral's Art Thread

    Beautiful, specially the brunette's portrait.
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    Writing Prompt Country Building: Fantasy World Antarctica

    Have you ever played Rimworld on an ice sheet map? Cannibalism and some more cannibalism. That's your answer. Human skin coats...hmm how haute couture.
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    Writing Prompt The world is ending in 60 seconds. What goes through your head? [250 words]

    The world is ending in 60 seconds and there is nowhere to hide. Powerful nuclear bomb, nearby planet explodes, gigantic asteroid, alien invasion, lethal insta-killing disease : The choice is yours. Write what goes through your head during those last 60 seconds. Rule : First person viewpoint...
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    Have you ever been kabe-don'd?

    In my country, people don't that. If you do it, they will think you have a screw loose in your head and watch way too much Asian dramas. I personally don't see the appeal behind it. To portray romantic/sexual tension in writing, I prefer describing body language or expressions. You can express...
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    About reincarnation novels

    I just wanted to add something no one mentioned so far. When it comes to reincarnation storylines, you have to distinguish between two major types : First, the MC reincarnates into a foreign world with someone else's body ( or in some cases, an animal's or a a magical beast's body). Or second...
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    Recommendations Looking for an army building story, God Protagonist or Kingdom Building

    I think this would fit the bill, army building first and later fief building. It is non-harem (the MC loves one person) and is quite pleasant to read. https://www.novelupdates.com/series/i-am-the-monarch/ Sypnosis : Roan, ran away 20 years ago from his rural village in the aim of becoming a...
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    Deleted I reincarnated as a busty elf

    Writers have to grow thicker skin. As @CupcakeNinja mentioned, it is the internet and you should expect people not to coddle you, some of them might be outright assholes. That's just how it is. I got two consecutive 0.5 rating on RR. It did upset me but it didn't stop me from writing. While...
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    Deleted I reincarnated as a busty elf

    Maybe the author themselves deleted it?
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    Deleted I reincarnated as a busty elf

    I think overtly 'sexual' titles were banned but I'm not sure. It doesn't seem to be applied to everyone.
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    Suggestion for Academy Arc?

    oh boy, I might have seemed antagonistic without even meaning to. I'm sorry about that. What I meant to say that a writer is free to rearrange their plot however they wish so an academy arc can be either later to the story or earlier. That is the point I disagreed with you on. It doesn't make...
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    Army in Zombie Apocalypse story

    Introducing COVID19. If one thing that this virus has taught us is how horrible governments can be at containing outbreak of highly contagious viruses. So yes, take inspiration from reality.
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    Why do you hate Mary Sue? They're perfect!!!

    Wise words, my friend. Not needing others to like you because you deem yourself as perfect pretty much sums the standard mindset of your typical narcissistic.
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    Recommendations Looking for army building story

    I think this would also suit you. I'm currently reading it and it is surprisingly better than I expected. https://www.novelupdates.com/series/i-am-the-monarch/ Sypnosis : Roan, ran away 20 years ago from his rural village in the aim of becoming a Great General. However, all he got 20 years...
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    Suggestion for Academy Arc?

    This is actually reason enough for an academy arc. If your MC was raised by spirit beasts then he is lacking in social skills and has no clue how to be human. This arc could be his insight into civilized human society. Through it, he can learn to form social bonds with other humans and...
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    Character Stats and Other Cliches

    I rarely read liteRPG and Isekai doesn't bother me as long as it isn't your typical hetero cardboard MC with the endless harem. I think rather than measuring a character's strength with a number, give them a visible feature, like the kind of weapon they yield, the color of their aura or what...
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    Editing Style guide to writing numbers.

    Thanks for the detailed guide @flucket :) As @Rinne mentioned, it is a psychological thing. Once your reader's mind is wired to seeing letters and you suddenly drop a number that isn't spelled out, it breaks their sense of immersion. I don't know if I do it consciously or not but I have always...
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