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I think your bones look wonderful! All 738,274,924...619,724,003.61 of them! Very mind-shattering, soul-quaking.

Then go eat an empire, silly. And some light elementals posing as gods... Yum yum!

Side note, but about the poll. Where's the option for eating cookies while perched on top of the fence like a crow or a Mistborn or an edgy teenager or a gargoyle?

Only if you're a manavore. But then you're better off nibbling on a World Tree, why bother with a dragon that'll fight back?

Only if it is spiky and/or cracked/broken-in-two. Or I suppose if I get to change the color and move it from above my head to behind my back (and vice-versa) at will.

Lots of muscles, too tough. Not tender! 2/10.

Only if I also get to be a demon.

I feel like I should adjust my stance. Onomatopoeia isn't a problem, stand-alone onomatopoeia is. You can use it in a sentence just fine, eg "the door opened with a bang", "clanging of swords being bashed against each other", but just going "bang" "clang" is lazy and poor writing and it doesn't...

Well I know he used monster's powers after eating them at least, and could shapeshift into them. Can't recall if he ever got the memories of those he ate.

So... Rimiru? From 'That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime'?

Nay, knave! Fists flew, whistling as they met naught but air. Heralded by nothing but a crisp clink, there was a flash. The attacker stumbled forward, boots scuffing as they kicked up dust. The attacker's body, divested of it's lower half, toppled, hitting the ground with a sickening, wet thud...

Even if you lose your memories, I believe you would still retain the basic way your mind works, your principles and beliefs, but the reasons why you hold them would be inaccessible to you, and possibly the foundations holding it that way would be gone, thus allowing you to change them easier. I...

Popularity does not equal quality. And I believe we should aim for the best out of principle, rather than just good enough. If you're not striving for an ideal, then why bother living? That doesn't read like a mere onomatopoeia, it reads like a descriptive sentence, with a word emphasized in a...

Neither, cause they're no longer alive. I have slain them for their sin. And I mean, adding vegetables doesn't make it less fattening. And there are multiple ways to solve the problem. Exercise, just don't eat them too frequently, or skip meals! (Don't do the last one. I mean, I do, but I'm a...

It being an action scene doesn't change anything, it carries the same flaws, there are the same, better options, and it conveys the same feeling of awkwardness to the reader. Novels are not comic books. It is impossible (or, nigh impossible at least, just to cover my ass) to integrate...

Cheese, and some kind of condiment. Or mix of condiments. Bacon is optional, and I've had mushrooms on a fancy burger one time and that was good. No onions no pickles no tomatoes no lettuce or any other vegetable-like matter!

To me as a reader it feels jarring for the medium, and like an inexperienced writer thing. There are better ways to convey sound in a novel. More integrated, but also more, specific and simultaneously abstract. Trying to describe a sound via onomatopoeia is a bad idea because it's limited to...

I don't think that's quite right, a lot of the sins can be summed up as 'desire', hell, all of them can be. Greed is the desire to possess, to hoard Gluttony is the desire to use, to waste (not strictly about eating food, that's just the easiest example) Envy is the desire to have/be what...

Greed. All you have to do is look at the state of the modern world. Or rather, Greed is the most dangerous in people. If we are talking about a supernaturally empowered Incarnation of a sin, then either Wrath or Lust. Wrath is very directly dangerous, not much to talk about, but Lust can be...

Dominates any pillow fight, nay, pillow war!