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  1. DaisukeHanashi

    My current state of experience as a college student

    I know it's too late for me to reply, but I absolutely treasure your advices a lot. I'll keep them in mind, so that I may build a good habit and mindset to go through some hardships that I have to go through (even if I may be in a quite unfortunate state). Thanks for replying ;)
  2. DaisukeHanashi

    (COLLEGE RANT) Why do minor subjects exist?

    Fuck minor subjects, I hate them... I hate them with all my life. They're the most useless, irrelevant, stress-inducing piece of freaking crap I have ever been forced to go through with the course. Like wtf?? Do I have to re-learn the basic general science stuff again after LOOOONG years of...
  3. DaisukeHanashi

    I just regret writing a 10k words worth of Prologue chapter

    Well, except I didn’t actually front-load all of those unfamiliar terms in the prologue chapter, and I also edited some texts that explains just quite the meaning of its term ‘haxe’. So again, don’t take the dictionary part like a part of prologue or some sort of. Instead, just take it as a...
  4. DaisukeHanashi

    I just regret writing a 10k words worth of Prologue chapter

    The head-jumping 'problem' seems to be rather difficult for me to adjust because I just wrote them as if the camera transitions from the eye of a first character to the eye of a second character while seeing and standing on the very same place... albeit a different timeline (if you're talking...
  5. DaisukeHanashi

    Asking for feedback on my updated prologue chapter

    I don't know. For some reason, the system doesn't let me update my signature with a link on it (because it's 18+?)
  6. DaisukeHanashi

    Asking for feedback on my updated prologue chapter

    Just asking for it bcuz I made it quite better, shorter, and focused.
  7. DaisukeHanashi

    I just regret writing a 10k words worth of Prologue chapter

    Well, I already cut off some unnecessary parts and also revise some into something quite more immersive. Hopefully, it'll be a big sigh of relief to my problems
  8. DaisukeHanashi

    I just regret writing a 10k words worth of Prologue chapter

    Hmmm... I see. Apparently, I just thought of it at first through the same way that Brandon Sanderson did on his prologue in Mistborn. He started with a character that has just unimportant pagetime by explaining what the fk is going on with the Inquisitors at that time iirc... and then...
  9. DaisukeHanashi

    I just regret writing a 10k words worth of Prologue chapter

    So just cutting off some parts will help? I can definitely see that my head-jumping method was just poorly done in my book. Maybe i should have leave them in side chapters while giving my two main characters a strong focus. Or perhaps even better to just present them in a certain right time...
  10. DaisukeHanashi

    I just regret writing a 10k words worth of Prologue chapter

    I just compared my own work to some other Latest Series work... and they immediately have some favorites and numbers of "Plan To Read". Even it is written by just newly-registered author, and they just get two-digits on Readers count. I don't know why, but the reason for writing a 10k word...
  11. DaisukeHanashi

    Have you ever fallen in love at first sight?

    Well, I used to be infatuated by my crush who really acts sentimental towards me.
  12. DaisukeHanashi

    My current state of experience as a college student

    If I would've worked on a part-time job, it would just take 3-4 years for me to afford a high-end PC because each full-time duty will grant me an average earnings of half-a-dollar (or specifically, about 500 Philippine pesos per DAY). And high-end PC/laptop will cost around 100K Philippine...
  13. DaisukeHanashi

    My current state of experience as a college student

    Heyya~ I'm a college student who currently studies Bachelor of Science in Information Technology... and also suffers in financial crisis as I only have a shitty low-end laptop and zero budget while I would be pursuing Multimedia Development in the next school year. And if you don't know what...
  14. DaisukeHanashi

    Asking for a certain tips on writing a sexual cultivation technique

    Those magics that are listed in my OP are just external factor-based, so it utilizes more into an aura which grants their enemies, for example, an impression that will lower their morale... in other words, descalating the fight, as you had said. Hence, I'll quote again from Aphro part, "one...
  15. DaisukeHanashi

    What did you learn today?

    I learned about Polymorphism, Inheritance, Abstraction, and Encapsulation in Java Object-Oriented Programming. Still learning more about GUI implementation, though, which is the most interesting part.
  16. DaisukeHanashi

    Asking for a certain tips on writing a sexual cultivation technique

    My work contains sexual cultivation technique (tag) that may deem necessary for my magic system based on one of the Seven Deadly Sins... LUST. So here's my idea, Each of the seven sins has its variety of abilities that are correlated to a substance of sin. For example, PRIDE (kinda...
  17. DaisukeHanashi

    How many words do you usually write in a single chapter?

    Just as the title says, I want to know about the tips on how to be productive on writing chapters...in how much hours you spend. Especially with someone who has a Patreon/SubscribeStar/or any third-party funding sites
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