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I'm all day here, from morning to before I go to sleep.

There's no need for step six, you can rule 30, 50 years or so and then leave them alone. Let them do the work and just check them from time to time. If everything goes to hell again, it's their problem. Let the inhabitants solve it themselves, you already gave them new ideas and knowledge to...

I want to add more on my point about avoiding the inhabitants to see you as a God. They'll see you as an outsider (I assume you managed to hide the fact you aren't from that world), making it easy for them to think that it's impossible to do what you ask for. It's also on the nature of humans...

I'll share my thoughts, which may or may not be included in my novel in the future. For obvious reasons I can only make it as a list, this is basically world domination though. It isn't in order. First win over the repressed, even if you have so much power, you are only one person. Gather as...

That's what my story is about :blob_sweat:

I also want to share this channel about HEMA Blood and Iron HEMA https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsBbd3QJ-IT2g8kSvq3r3RA

My most OP characters doesn't exist in my story, and the whole point of it is to avoid her existence. Dark Empress Irene Aldridge. Immunity to physical attacks. Immunity to magical attacks. Immune to curses. Immune to blessings. Immortality: Resurrection and infinite life span. Regeneration...

You're first place in trending, congratulations.

Yeah my story isn't for everyone. The OP powers come with disadvantages and risks, and MC has no experience in battle.

Am I the only one who makes the OP protagonist lose battles? :blob_sweat:

A lot better :s_smile:

Also you haven't put spaces between paragraphs, add another "enter". Your story looks like this (it's worse on the phone) And is easier to read like this.

I don't know how much you explore magic in the story, but an easy improvement would be "Lilly: Story of a Magical Girl"

This first video isn't about writing, but it explains the difference between action scenes and fight scenes (two people against each other/one vs many). This one goes deeper and is about writing, I highly suggest you watch it. Another one, this shows how not to make a boring one. It helps if...

I love the first chapter, this is my type of story. I highly recommend it https://www.scribblehub.com/series/111654/reborn-as-a-magical-girl-villain/

This video will help you.

I consider it a success if I can impact the life of one person. Is a lost cause if no one reads it, but I'll finish it no matter what because there's a message I want to share; I also hate it when people don't finish the novels I like. So I'll always finish it even if I just rush the ending.

I should be writing right now, but I'm happy one of my favorite novels made it to trending. I highly recommend it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/108367/the-queen-of-darkness-does-not-want-to-be-the-villain/