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  1. ModernGold7ne

    The absolute state of Scribble Hub

    I found this site on reddit when i searched for alternatives to royalroad.
  2. ModernGold7ne

    Highlight threads in the feedback section that has no replies.

    Scenario: A bunch of writers request feedback at the same time, one of those writers are inadvertedly ignored due to the rush of requests. I don't think anyone would want that to happen.
  3. ModernGold7ne

    Which is better?

    He sacrified himself for all of us, may he rest in peace.
  4. ModernGold7ne

    Which is better?

    By difficulty, he/she means getting seen. The population of china is quite large.
  5. ModernGold7ne

    Which is better?

    About royalroad, I feel you, my story which has only been live for a few days has been statistically viewed or seen by almost nobody. Same story on scribblehub is doing miles better, in terms of recognition.
  6. ModernGold7ne

    Which is better?

    Was the question rhetorical? Cause if not, SCRIBBLEHUB all the way!
  7. ModernGold7ne

    A sort of writer help thing for us newcomers

    Favorite and favourite are both correct, it is spelt differently in different part of the worlds. According to my auto correct which is set to UK english, favorite is spelt wrong, but that's false, the spelling was just the American version.
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    A sort of writer help thing for us newcomers

    Did not even realize this was the wrong thread.
  9. ModernGold7ne

    A sort of writer help thing for us newcomers

    I read everything. You have too much commentary, that does not add anything of value to the story. You lied in chapter two when you said there would be only one pov. There's a large unfilled space in chapter 3, backspace a bit. In chapter 4 the name Damien was repeated too many times...
  10. ModernGold7ne

    Please give a feedback on my synopsis.

    Too long, too many spoilers, why are you treating us like we're publishers?
  11. ModernGold7ne

    What is your opinion of Webnovel.com?

    And you spoke the truth, they really are like that.
  12. ModernGold7ne

    How to write accent?

    Write the way you want them to sound, just make sure there's clarity. You're overthinking it, Ai-chan gave a good example.
  13. ModernGold7ne

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Modified my title to increase accuracy, not going to highlight the race of the protagonist since my story has little to nothing to do with fairies. My depiction of fairy strays far from the norm, not based on tinkerbell.
  14. ModernGold7ne

    The absolute state of Scribble Hub

    Scribblehub seem geared towards aspiring writers, from my experience, if you ask someone here for help, you're most likely to get it. The feedback section here is more active than the one on royalroad, strangers willingly help other strangers, assisting while trying their best to not...
  15. ModernGold7ne

    The absolute state of Scribble Hub

    The writers are just as important in my opinion, after all without them, would there really be a scribblehub?
  16. ModernGold7ne

    Parental guardian, please help

    My mum also knows I write, my mc is nude, has a dirty mouth and yet, I shove my story in her face, whenever i write a new chapter. (She's fine with it, not sure about yours.)
  17. ModernGold7ne

    hiya! can someone give me feedback on this book?

    Thanks, it's 3 am, I can't muster up any emotions, so back to bed for me.
  18. ModernGold7ne

    hiya! can someone give me feedback on this book?

    As for Harmless sweetie, it feels episodic, easy to visualise but with a messed up flow, you should work on your chapter transitions. Also presentation is important, not how the story reads but how it is structured. Nothing wrong with giving information as long as that information is given...
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    hiya! can someone give me feedback on this book?

    Well there's not much one can do when they're dead and is talking to an info-dependent entity. In the regard of show and tell, chapter 2 and 3 are superior in that subject.
  20. ModernGold7ne

    The absolute state of Scribble Hub

    Or a serious-but-not-always one if you feel like it, currently reading a girl to boy story, why? Felt like it.
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