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I found this site on reddit when i searched for alternatives to royalroad.

Scenario: A bunch of writers request feedback at the same time, one of those writers are inadvertedly ignored due to the rush of requests. I don't think anyone would want that to happen.

He sacrified himself for all of us, may he rest in peace.

By difficulty, he/she means getting seen. The population of china is quite large.

About royalroad, I feel you, my story which has only been live for a few days has been statistically viewed or seen by almost nobody. Same story on scribblehub is doing miles better, in terms of recognition.

Was the question rhetorical? Cause if not, SCRIBBLEHUB all the way!

Favorite and favourite are both correct, it is spelt differently in different part of the worlds. According to my auto correct which is set to UK english, favorite is spelt wrong, but that's false, the spelling was just the American version.

Did not even realize this was the wrong thread.

I read everything. You have too much commentary, that does not add anything of value to the story. You lied in chapter two when you said there would be only one pov. There's a large unfilled space in chapter 3, backspace a bit. In chapter 4 the name Damien was repeated too many times...

Too long, too many spoilers, why are you treating us like we're publishers?

And you spoke the truth, they really are like that.

Write the way you want them to sound, just make sure there's clarity. You're overthinking it, Ai-chan gave a good example.

Modified my title to increase accuracy, not going to highlight the race of the protagonist since my story has little to nothing to do with fairies. My depiction of fairy strays far from the norm, not based on tinkerbell.

Scribblehub seem geared towards aspiring writers, from my experience, if you ask someone here for help, you're most likely to get it. The feedback section here is more active than the one on royalroad, strangers willingly help other strangers, assisting while trying their best to not...

The writers are just as important in my opinion, after all without them, would there really be a scribblehub?

My mum also knows I write, my mc is nude, has a dirty mouth and yet, I shove my story in her face, whenever i write a new chapter. (She's fine with it, not sure about yours.)

Thanks, it's 3 am, I can't muster up any emotions, so back to bed for me.

As for Harmless sweetie, it feels episodic, easy to visualise but with a messed up flow, you should work on your chapter transitions. Also presentation is important, not how the story reads but how it is structured. Nothing wrong with giving information as long as that information is given...

Well there's not much one can do when they're dead and is talking to an info-dependent entity. In the regard of show and tell, chapter 2 and 3 are superior in that subject.

Or a serious-but-not-always one if you feel like it, currently reading a girl to boy story, why? Felt like it.