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That opens the possibility to these occurrences being specialized to the victim. Does that mean the evil deity’s type of evil is determined by the person who chooses violet? to answer reason: I do not believe reason is SOLELY possessed by humans, just as I do not believe compassion and kindness...

The Red Marionette sounds best, because um I’ve already had self-worth issues and pick the devil you know? The Yellow Dummy is such a cruel fate, to be happy all the time. Happy no matter how you are treated, as you lose everything important to you, as you are deprived of even righteous anger...

Green immediately made me think of pimple volcano eruptions… ewww For the black, would your mind be controlled by logic? So, potentially, you could keep living the same way, like a high-functioning psychopath, following the rules you made for yourself even if you no longer care?

Desperately types “buy” after searching “pieces of cracked pavement” so as to specify that I would like to purchase said item. My FBI agent stares on in confusion

The so-called hero stood, facing the so-called villain. “You… I wont’t fight you” the hero whispers, allowing the drawling syllables to reach the ears of the villain. “Ha! All these people are at risk! And you won’t fight me?” The enraged villain grits their teeth, anger oozing from every...

*Gru meme* Want to improve as writer. Makes poll to get feedback from readers. Readers read poll and do not respond. Readers do not respond?

If you go by stereotypes… wise old wizard - seen a lot, lots of experience, knows how to behave in various situations intelligent young scholar - quick to learn, good grasp of theories and come up with new ones, etc There’s a reason you hear “wise beyond their years” but not “intelligent...

Thank you so much!

I feel the need to share that I got an ad on scribblehub for one of those “don’t need a blue pill do this” scams but they distinctly used a Percy Jackson and Annabeth fan art

You lost The Game

Oh thank goodness, I was worried it would come off as “narrator wants to shove stuff in but make it thoughts”

Thank you for the words! Overall? I want to improve my writing but doubting if it’s good enough so far to keep going without a rewrite. Been a tough day at work tho, so I may need to just step back for a minute. …if anyone would like to sponsor me, I will write in, you know, like a ten page...

Hello all! I’ve been telling myself that I will keep track of all the comments and such and THEN do a rewrite, but should I just do a rewrite like, now? Is it better the fix the problems as they crop up? Do you gain or lose readers this way? Do readers actually read rewrites or completed...

Sorry everyone for the break in comments! I got tired!! I will be back for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Feels called out on comment one, but I still have the tabs up to go through and comment… I’m just tired guys please