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lol its an attention grabber from the first line. We live in the era of clickbait...its a shame not to be masters of it by now, eh?

its always harder to work with vague synopsis. Theres basically nothing to latch onto, no real point of interest. The concept is there, and the sense of ambiguous tragedy, but yeah...my rule of thumb is to take what will be told within the first five to ten chapters and work that into your...

someone else already broke it down so i didn't bother, i just rewrote it. Was a pretty vague synopsis, so mainly just touched it up a bit. Dunno if its to your liking or not?

i dunno but these are the only one i know that was kinda famous at least among my circles oh and this one, but i also doubt this was it

really just setting the bar to the ground, huh?

it doesnt have anything to do withe the story itself and is only vaguely spoken about once....but Battle Through The Heavens' MC is a reincarnator from Earth Its used to explain how he has a stronger soul and was more mature than other kids his age, because he used that power to somehow help...

this man is blessed by the Writing God himself. I don't do that often, either

well im not blind so i usually just describe what I'm looking at. Color is a big one, i describe color all the time I gots me a blue throw blanket the other day, put it atop my plush, red recliner i snagged from GoodWIll. Its a bit frayed on some edges, but that's why i got the blanket

orange flavoured candy is the weakest of all flavours

The short answer is no. The long answer is fuck you, no It depends how long the story is, but twenty or so chapters or more of rewritten material? nah, i ain't about that life. Dont expect ME, at least, to reread all that. Now, i was also in a sorta similar position too, but it wasn't because i...

and the best way to learn is by experiencing it yourself. I mean that's why I do the occasional line. Not for any other reason. Just, you know, to improve my writing skills.

some people think well written means likable. Easy heroines who basically submit to the MC on everything and just act cute all the time. I mainly care about personality, tho. If they don't feel a bit realistic, i don't like them as much. Feels like they should have their own troubles and...

is that due to the POV use? Because i can get like that too. First person draws me in better but most use third person. Thing is, they don't really use it right so any emotional attachment that could still be there is lost in the passive ass voice of the MC. That said, i don't really mind MCs...

the fuck...? how do you know my high school nickname?

it depends on their characters. i like when an MC is a bit of a womanizer, but also when they're serious in their affection for any heroine. I don't like seeing mistreatment going on. I suppose the best example is taking a male lead from an erotica novel, where they're fiercely protective and...

mountains out of molehills, buddy

just being a cunt and making a big deal out of nonsensical issues that no one else cares about. Like you know how when you get a female dog, and then when mating season comes all the male dogs gather around and just start humping her, then you're there tryna fight them off? well its like tryna...

someone spreading my pics again. Smh never trust women. Always gotta share

why're they all gathered around your crotch?

yeah but all that makes me think is, "who the fuck is Emuna? Why should i care about this cunt? Summer story, huh....gonna be all beach parties with friends and teen angst, huh? Why should they be happy...." meanwhile the other just makes me curious Well Phineas and Ferb had "104 days of summer...