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Ranger is best.

Also, if you're writing fantasy specifically, I recommend the mainstays, Shadiversity for reakistic weapon stuff: https://youtube.com/user/shadmbrooks And Brandon Sanderson's free online writing course, which will likely help you in general...

? Very barebones - I draw it, then take a picture with an app called tiny scanner. Then I adjust the contrast, and boom.

Thank you, here's the other character I've drawn:

I primarily write. I will review stories upon request though.

I like your mermaid! I've got some merfolk of my own for my story:

My advice: WRITE. Writer's block is a demon to be slain, a mountain to be bored through. Taking moments of rest from the battle is advised, but you cannot simply evade the obstacle. We have a tendency to fear just writing when we have writer's block. We are afraid our writing will be...

Ah, that makes sense. It is a challenge to be sure. All of writing is difficult for everyone in some way. But the feeling you get when you get people that genuinely want more of your work... ? It's great. You'll get there, it just takes practice.

I'd say a general proofread of grammar would help. The big thing in fight scenes is that you want the reader to understand everything as easily as possible. You want them to be able flow through it easily. I think right now that's the big thing that will help improve your scene. Present tense...

My personal take was not so much first person, but the present tense. I've read fantastic action scenes with first person Pov, but present tense rarely is palpable to me.

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This video. Need I say more?

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