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  1. Snowyflakes

    Phew* real work

    I think it is a decent amount of time both for writing and editing. I sometimes spend 3-4 hours writing and then half a day editing until I am satisfied. And even then, I'm not entirely satisfied, but at least it's not total garbage.:blob_pat_sad: I've recently read my first writings (from so...
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    Short Feedback Thread

    Thank you for the review! Yes, I am working on the quality of the chapters, although it will take time. I don't want to stop posting, and I edit once in a while when I have the time. And I lack the time both to write and to edit, so I do what I can. :blob_sweat:
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    Short Feedback Thread

    I want a review too. Link in the signature. :biggrin_s:
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    New Story Idea, Whaddya think? God Of War Inspired.

    The idea is intriguing; revenge as an answer to injustice and trust in one's own abilities.:blobthumbsup: I'm not sure if I'd read it, though (there are many elements to take into consideration, such as the writing style, the action, the characters, and so on). However, I believe that there...
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    Writers, keep a journal for your ideas.

    Until I find one notebook or journal (solely for writing ideas for books) that fits my design taste, I write whatever ideas come to mind on my phone or on Word. There are a few things I jot down on paper, but I want a journal only for this purpose. Also, I found it helpful to search for quotes...
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    First chapter, please read and give opinion.

    Hi! I will tell you my opinion, splitting it into two: technicalities (grammar, phrasing, and so on) and from a reader's point of view (mixed with some knowledge as a writer). However, I want to mention that English is my second language, so keep that in mind. Technicalities From a reader's...
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    How do I say "Lol no" in a more respectable manner?

    :blob_hide: :blob_hmm_two: Something like 'Congratulations, you managed to amuse and disgust me at the same time', I think.
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Thank you for your feedback! Names & Worldbuilding - Yes, I wanted names with meanings, and when I did my research, I found out the origins as well. However, the names' origins are irrelevant to the worldbuilding. I also chose not to provide too much relevant information about the world at the...
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Hi! I would also like a review. I want it here. Thank you in advance! (I want to mention that I am in the process of editing (the last chapter was not edited at all:blob_facepalm:), so I am sorry for the eventual mistakes.) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/536925/under-thanatos-gaze/
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    Anyone want to give me feedback on my story? :)

    Hi! I had read all three chapters. Right off the bat, I can say that the synopsis caught my interest. When it comes to grammar and prose, I didn’t sense any flaws or, at least, there was nothing that bothered me too much to take into consideration. There were a few sentences that I needed to...
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    My Free Feedback Thread

    Thank you for your feedback! Story - While emotional evolution is present throughout the storyline, personal growth and skills development are likewise part of it. Of course, I won't reveal more. The MC - She is presented as being shy and emotional at the beginning of the story, only because...
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    Thank you :blob_popcorn:

    Thank you :blob_popcorn:
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    What would you expect after reading this synopsis? Honest opinion.

    Hi! To me, it sounds like an army came and destroyed his homeland from its roots for some stupid reason, and that he used some knowledge of necromancy and brought his people back to life to take back his realm. And that he is suffering after his dead lover.
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    My Free Feedback Thread

    Hello! I would like a review as well. Thank you in advance! Edit: I forgot to mention that I want it here. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/536925/under-thanatos-gaze/
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hi! I would also like a review. Thank you in advance! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/536925/under-thanatos-gaze/
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    [aggregator] steals novels.

    Mine is there too... And I've posted it here (and only here) yesterday...
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    I have some synopses done, can someone help me choose one?

    Hello! Personally, I like the first one the most. It is more descriptive and it helped me to better understand the world you have created. Basically, it is more immersive than the rest of the synopses.
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