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  1. Bartun

    Most OP Character fr fr

    I haven't written him yet, but I plan to introduce a 'dragon' character in my next book. He's going to be the strongest character of the story by far.
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    Traditional Medieval stories

    It seems you already watched the cool stuff. Maybe 'Flesh and Blood' from the director of Robocop and 'The Last Duel'. For books, I would love to recommend my novel but it is not yet finished.
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    SmutHub: Real or Not?

    I never understood how 'trending' works and how to get more readers. I've been posting my story here since 2020 and it is still nearly invisible. I'm not complaining, I am the only one at fault for not being consistent, and I understand the genre I write isn't the most popular.
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    It's just me.

    I just lurk around and comment from time to time but never left. Never realized there was any drama until now. :cry:
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    Perception is strange

    I recall when I had to put down my beloved pet. He was too old and could barely walk. I waited until midnight to shoot him while he slept so he wouldn't suffer. That few hours before midnight were an eternity. Worst night of my life. When I went on a date with my childhood sweetheart, the...
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    Writing OP Characters

    I'm writing a somewhat OP character and this helps. I already implemented many of the points but I need to constantly check and double-check because it's too easy to get carried away by the power and rush to the fight scenes.
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    What's the biggest gripe readers have against your mc?

    My MC is just an idealistic, naive, slightly arrogant teenage girl with no idea how the real world works so she makes A LOT of dumb-ass mistakes at first. She is forced to grow and evolve through the story but many readers don't like her because she makes mistakes that other more mature...
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    Why does is suck so much to write a battle scene?.

    I love writing battle scenes. I think I'm getting good at it. To be fair, it's easier to write realistic fight scenes with real-world rules, at least for me, because I don't have to adjust to a 'system' constantly. My MC is a teenage girl who can barely fight and other characters are doing the...
  9. Bartun

    The secret to a good power(magic) system.

    Best magic system out there. Easy to understand. :s_wink:
  10. Bartun

    Cover Art Dump

    Amazing work!
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    Bunch of questions about your power system

    The magic system in my universe:
  12. Bartun

    How many chapters did you stack before posting?

    I originally stacked 5 chapters before posting, but then I had to post them after writing which in my case takes months. :cry:
  13. Bartun

    Chapter 19 is finally up!

    Oh! Now I get it! :sweat_smile: Sorry, my birdbrain freezes sometimes
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    What separates a bad written villain to a good written villain

    I concur. King Jeoffrey from GOT is a great example, he's a fantastic character but an appalling villain, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. He's evil for the sake of being evil since he didn't have a 'rough childhood' or anything to justify being wicked, and selfish, and he doesn't really...
  15. Bartun

    Chapter 19 is finally up!

    I'm not sure :blob_sweat:
  16. Bartun

    Demons

    In my story, the supernatural doesn't exist. There are rare fauna like dinosaurs and other extinct animals but nothing like demons.
  17. Bartun

    Chapter 19 is finally up!

    Thanks! Honestly, I don't procrastinate much, on the contrary, I write whenever I can. It's just that my chapters are long as hell and I don't have much time to write. ?
  18. Bartun

    What was the first isekai anime that you ever saw?

    Probably Inuyasha
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