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  1. Bartun

    Can you write smart characters even if you arent one?

    There is a difference between intelligence and experience. A character might be smart and still make stupid-ass decisions if they don't have the experience.
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    Recommendations Religious Protagonist

    I'm not sure if it fits your criteria, but my novel's MC is religious. She's a priestess with just a bit of prejudice and self-righteousness but definitely not a hatred-driven fanatic. :s_frown:
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    If you had the chance to bring someone back to life, what would you sacrifice?

    I wouldn't. I'm a lonely dino but we had our time. It was good. Now is the hoomies' turn. Even though they blow each other to pieces from time to time, they deserve a chance. They deserve to be happy too.
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    You In The Past

    I never wrote anything but I started creating stories like 25 years ago. The core of my story began as the 'lore' of my toys. My brother and I created worlds, characters, and backstories for each character, ultimately creating a massive universe that could rival any science fiction universe. But...
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    My story got stolen by an aggregator audiobook site

    https://audio-book-ai.com/book/nowhere-to-run-RR-42939 They made one of my book too! I feel flattered ? Edit: I just registered and listened. The audio is a feminine voice with a weird robotic accent. It's okayish when reading paragraphs but trash when reading dialogues.
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    Writing Prompt how has life curb stomped you?

    Great, now a giant freaking meteorite takes humanoid form. But momma dino raised no quitter.
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    How much time for a chapter?

    Between 3 to 6 months. I'm very slow to post chapters :cry:
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    Scrapped Ideas, We All Have Them. How Cringe Are They?

    I have plenty, some more cringe than others.
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    Congratulations!

    Congratulations!
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    What is your way of recovering from a simple illness?

    I wouldn't know. Never in my life I've been ill for more than a day ?
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    How to create impactful fights?

    I've written a few fight scenes. Some people say they are really good. Other people say they are the only thing good about my book. If learned something, is not about how the fight goes, or what X character does to defeat Y character, but how much the reader is invested in those characters. I...
  12. Bartun

    Favorite Soul-Borne game?

    I loved Little Witch Nobeta, but my favorite Soul-like game would be Made in Abyss: Binary Star. That game is just sick. Never played a game so challenging and yet so fun. enjoyed every bit of it.
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    Hi guys! Just rewritten the first chapter of my novel Nowhere to Run. Now it reads much better...

    Hi guys! Just rewritten the first chapter of my novel Nowhere to Run. Now it reads much better. Hopefully, you'll like it. ? I'll leave the link below if you wish to take a look. Stay safe! Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/283095-nowhere-to-run/chapter/288798/
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    At last! The last chapter of my book is finally up!

    Ok, I'm rewriting the first chapters of my book. They are in dire need of attention. Here goes the first chapter, completely rewritten, if you wish to take a look. Hopefully, it reads better now and you won't die from cringe halfway through it. ? Link...
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    Popular among your friends?

    All my dino friends are gone. My humie friends are cool though. I'm the one odd out but I don't mind.
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    Where does wish fulfillment go too far?

    My wish-fulfilling is finishing my story ?
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    Tell me about your taste

    My blood is reserved for certain envious vampy, so you'll have to guess. ?
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