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  1. KoyukiMegumi

    What makes you give a story a 1-star rating?

    Trying to pop cherries, I see... Kitty is watching you, goddess.~ :blob_hide:
  2. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing drama in a romance

    So there is a strain in their relationship. You can keep writing things like that. Like 'Oh... I don't like the way she looks at him!' or 'Oh... why is he doing that with her...' MC can do things to make G1 even more annoyed and eventually all that tension can snap. Like a twig. Do you know who...
  3. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    Thank you for bringing this up! I have thought much about how it affects the world and the people that live in it. Mostly no one cares for those who have lost or can't learn magic. And instead of spells, I guess you can think of it as the magic in the avatar, the last air bender. They can...
  4. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing drama in a romance

    Even cliche things can be nice to read at times. Not everything has to be 100% original. Though... it is more fun that way! Try to make their relationship strain because of their feelings. Like who does MC like? G1 or G2? You could make a good triangle. Or maybe make it so G1 and G2 agree to...
  5. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing need help for writing a novel's sake

    You can always create your own monsters or races too! :blob_melt:
  6. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    Thank you, I will watch this. To be honest never thought of things like this. Imo it depends on what kind if story it is. To me this seems like the mc has an artifact or is a pureblood which was what I said before are the exception to this mana rule. Maybe I am not explaining myself well...
  7. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    I understand that concern. The MC is only free from the mana rule in this case. For example they can use crazy amounts of mana without keeling over. But that doesn't mean anything if they encounter a ground elemental monster because their power is essential useless. It is kind of like water...
  8. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    Nu this one does not! xD I am leaving the vamp/werewolf world with Gate series xP for a bit, going to elf, mystical spirits and dirty humans next! :blob_aww: *Not that gate series did not have dirty humans... or elves...* Hm... :blob_frown:
  9. KoyukiMegumi

    Worst gifts to give someone

    PFFFFFFT I say the worst gift you can ever give anyone is a cat. Those rascals train you to wake up at certain times and you have to do it or else... Everything hits the floor! So... I gift the world, cats! :blob_evil:
  10. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    You are blowing my mind tonight! :blob_aww: :blob_aww: Enlighten this undisciplined disciple! :blob_melt: I am finding so many teachers in SH.
  11. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    I understand your concern. Well... Does it count if MC is a combination of human + a good-like being? Do rules apply to these characters? They are basically an artificial elf made from a Celestial* one of the god-like beings* and a human. This happened because they needed a way for someone to...
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    Share? :blob_evil:

    Share? :blob_evil:
  13. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: :blob_shock: Help! My brain can't compute! I think I get it, but for this story, I think it is too intellectual...
  14. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    I kinda get what you are saying, but at the same time. I am utterly confused! In the terms you are using magic, users have high mana pools. So higher magic power? or Potential? I don't go into stats because it confuses me. I don't know how to do those! So, I just basically avoid these usually...
  15. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    Uh... I never have heard these concepts xD Bare with me~ 1. It is extremely uncommon, as barely anyone practices it, and those who have high mana pools are basically drafted into the military at birth. Those who do use it get rich quickly but die fast if they don't have an artifact to draw the...
  16. KoyukiMegumi

    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    Yes, you do not know how much inbreeding these crazies are doing! And they did do a super-soldier program and even worse they experiment on humans using alchemy to try to get the upper hand on the world. This... made things even worse.:blob_hide: "may be a result of that crazy inbreeding" You...
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